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"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water, and stupid men."
 |  | A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
< on 7/6/2006 3:05 AM >
|  | | | Here are a few photos I'd like critiques on. I'm a big boy and can take the harsh critiques - so give 'em up, since they'll help me improve.
Please, no location information or any of that nonsense.
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nutekk
 
Location: Central NJ
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 1 on 7/6/2006 4:08 AM >
| | | | all interesting in their own way... but #3 is just killer. i love it. the right shadow, the right contrast, the right light, and colors are so real. looks sick!
cheers !
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horrorshow
Location: NC
Gender: Male
| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 2 on 7/6/2006 7:05 AM >
| | | | they all look great man 1, 10 and 4 look really cool
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wackibob
Location: Rochester NY
Gender: Male
| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 3 on 7/6/2006 11:30 AM >
| | | | They all look great,thanks for sharing.
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NAN
 
Location: rochester NY
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| | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 4 on 7/6/2006 11:51 AM >
| | | | Great shots! I especially love No. 1 and and No. 3. That is some really wierd looking mold
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tippa
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
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| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 5 on 7/6/2006 2:32 PM >
| | | | 2 and 6 are a little dark... but other than that they look fairly well. morningwood ...haha
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RM
Location: Great Britain
Gender: Male
| |  | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 6 on 7/7/2006 12:46 AM >
| | | | First of Id like to say that there all of a reasonably high standard so any critique I'm offering is generally nitpicking stuff.
Some Intal thoughts:
1) Nice shot, angle works well could possibly be improved if the shot was taken from a lower point to include the bottom of the window frame on the left and less space at the top.
2) Well composed and exposed but im not all that thrilled by the subject.
3) Love the colours and tones on this one. Thought of rotating it 90 degrees? It might be interesting to see what its like at a different orientation.
4) The reflection is great in this photo, the dead space to the right is a little distracting... Though it looks like it would be reasonably hard to crop out.
5) Overexposed? possibly my monitor. Its some manky pipes with asbestos lagging - dosnt really do much for me.
6) Again possibly the exposure is a little to long. but generally it feels average as if it coul have been taken by anyone with a point and shoot.
7) Theres something cool about the subtle reflection of the photographer in this one. Intentional? may be improved by getting both pipes perfectly central.
8) Its a very overdone shot, But its well executed
9) Another strong image, Best of the closeup shots. Colours, DOF and composition all work well here.
10) Whats the point of focus in this photo? the bottom of the door? the windows? the wall behind? That said it does set the mood rather nicely. To me I looks like theres room for improvement on this one but I would struggle to suggest what could be done.
Generally as a set of photos I dont think they work together all that well, Its difficult to get a sense of uniformity across all the shots. Perhaps a breakdown to closeups / wider angle shots might help to alleviate this? It would certainly give a more considered set of photos overall.
Overall 1, 3, 4 and 9 stood out the most.
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Location: St. Paul, MN
Gender: Male
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| | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 8 on 7/7/2006 4:42 AM >
| | | | I love the placement of the knob that is out of focus in #2 next to the in focus pipe, it really draws your eye, at least it did for me.
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'Dukes
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| | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 9 on 7/7/2006 5:46 AM >
| | | | Good stuff.. I usually hate Morning wood, it sucks to have to stand on your head to take a leak.
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Ian
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"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water, and stupid men."
| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 10 on 7/8/2006 7:29 PM >
| | | | Posted by RM
A really good critique of the photos.
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Thanks dude
that's exactly what I was looking for
very helpful, and made me consider my photos again
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I am the Bear
Location: Seattle Wa
Gender: Male
| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 11 on 7/14/2006 3:31 AM >
| | | | i can tell you spent time paying attention to detail. i dont know why i dont like #5. its technically sound and has repetition, color, and texture. i suppose i'm just a dick.
i wish i could give suggestions and be helpful, but i cant think of any. I like them all a lot. i'm going to go look through your posts and find more.
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SpaceyT
Location: Maryland
Gender: Female
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| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 12 on 7/18/2006 3:26 PM >
| | | | Great pics!!! Good job !!!
Keep shooting!!!
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grassy
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| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 13 on 7/27/2006 5:36 AM >
| | | | Out of curiosity, what's your favorite aperture?
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the_doctor
Location: Boston area
Gender: Male
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| | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 14 on 7/27/2006 5:53 AM >
| | | | all your photos make me blow loads in my pants.
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Shai Hulud
Location: Evansville IN
Gender: Male
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| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 15 on 7/27/2006 7:02 AM >
| | | | I always really like your photos. These textures are incredible, mostly because of your shadows and colors. I want to reach out and touch some of these, they look so real. Great shots.
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Ian
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"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water, and stupid men."
| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 16 on 7/27/2006 3:00 PM >
| | | | Posted by grassy
Out of curiosity, what's your favorite aperture?
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f/11
my default unless I have some specific reason (DOF, not wanting to do a 1/2 hour exposure, etc) for using something else
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NickNervosa
Location: Philadelphia/ NJ
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 17 on 7/27/2006 3:56 PM >
| | | | I like them a lot. nice work on the lighting. I just think 5 would be better if you got the subject from a different angle.
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Jezebel
Location: TX
Gender: Female
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| | | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 18 on 7/27/2006 6:14 PM >
| | | | you have an awesome eye for color and texture. i think that your shots of larger areas are stronger than the shots you take when you close in on the subject, with the exception being #3 - which is just awesome. the scenes with the hallways/windows/doorways/rooms have a lot more visual impact than say... your photos of the pipes. and that's actually unusual for me to say because i tend to prefer "the details" in a scene. i'm envious - i have a hard time backing away and getting the whole image to look the way i want it to, but you're great at it. nice selection of photos.
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grassy
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| | Re: A few I liked from Morningwood State Hospital
<Reply # 19 on 7/27/2006 8:01 PM >
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That's my favorite for primes, with the zooms I opt for a little shallower DoF.
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