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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > factory nursing room (Viewed 421 times)
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factory nursing room
< on 6/24/2006 10:45 AM >
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Shot these pics in the red cross post of the factory safea. More safea HERE

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 1 on 6/24/2006 2:21 PM >
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Excellent pictures, I really like them.
The only thing I can think of is that #2 is a wee bit crooked, and (unless the windows have a glaze/tint/fog/what have you, which could be the case,) the windows in number 4 are a bit blown out...

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 2 on 6/24/2006 6:58 PM >
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Is this all one room? That's fantastic that you 6 good photos from one little room, if that is in fact what you did. The first 4 make a pretty good series, the last two seem a little out of place. Maybe it's the order..

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 3 on 6/24/2006 7:25 PM >
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3 & 6 are absolutely beautiful. Of the two I prefer 6, however, I do find the colour of the table leg in 6 draws my eye away. With 3, I think you could crop just a tad off the left side. Overall, I think they are great.

2 & 4 don't really do anything for me.

5 I am not a fan of the composition and lighting.

1 I am still not sure how I feel about. I waffle.





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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 4 on 6/24/2006 7:52 PM >
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Textures and more textures. Very lovely. I myself try to bring out the most in the decay of anything. These are well done, and the color balance is perfect..just enough high contrast to keep it sharp.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 5 on 6/25/2006 3:34 PM >
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they all are pretty great, but since this is a critique forum...
number two is really the only one with some problems. the vertical bar in the right offsets the cross, which, im assuming was supposed to be the main focus of the photo. therefore, the vertical bar is distracting and takes away from the cross's power in the photo. i personally would have done a portrait shot of the cross and zero out anything so it'd be just the cross.
just my opinions.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 6 on 6/27/2006 1:47 PM >
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1,3,4 and 6 are fantastic. I am not a serious photographer so my opinion is not worth much, but I love them. Thanks.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 7 on 6/30/2006 1:22 PM >
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really nice pictures mate...cant fault them really, apart from the last one looks like poor quality whether its how you re-sized it...

brilliant.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 8 on 6/30/2006 1:33 PM >
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I like all of them except #2 doesn't really do anything for me.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 9 on 6/30/2006 2:03 PM >
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1st 3rd 4th are really cool

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 10 on 7/1/2006 12:38 AM >
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I keep forgetting to post in this thread and mention that these are awesome. The texture on the second shot is fucking SICK! Nice job.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 11 on 7/1/2006 1:31 AM >
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Good job Yoze, yeah I gotta get back to that place.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 12 on 7/3/2006 7:20 AM >
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All of these are really eye-catching, but the first is my favorite. It's very unique, and I haven't seen a lot like it on UER. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: factory nursing room
<Reply # 13 on 7/6/2006 7:28 AM >
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like all these pics except for 2...its a bit bland angle wise when compared to your others

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