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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! (Viewed 341 times) Twystr  Location: 39.2N, 104.17W Elev. 6535ft Gender: Male Gimme Biggah Drayyyyynes!  |  Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! < on 6/21/2006 12:27 AM >   Here's a couple of drain pix... Dissect them and tell me what to improve. Looking out. Looking at Very Obvious Tunnel off of a bridge... Junction room of Citadel II. Photo of inside of VOT. "The man who trades freedom for security does not deserve nor will he ever receive either." -Ben Franklin Majickal  Location: Evansville, Indiana Gender: Male <3 Home Depot  |  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 1 on 6/21/2006 2:37 AM >   Can't really say any of these are strong pictures at all. Try for better subjects next time. I'd like to see more though. This is the sig laslow  Location: Tewksbury, MA you have quite a temper for someone who takes pictures of flowers  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 2 on 6/21/2006 3:12 AM >   Posted by Twystr Dissect them and tell me what to improve. dood u hit da bong 2? http://photography.about.com/od/basics/ Twystr  Location: 39.2N, 104.17W Elev. 6535ft Gender: Male Gimme Biggah Drayyyyynes!  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 3 on 6/21/2006 8:45 AM >   Thanks for the input... Mostly noob-ish stuff here. had a visit with a local photographer and a professor who teaches the subject (im taking it next semester), so expect better outta me soon! "The man who trades freedom for security does not deserve nor will he ever receive either." -Ben Franklin Twystr  Location: 39.2N, 104.17W Elev. 6535ft Gender: Male Gimme Biggah Drayyyyynes!  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 4 on 6/21/2006 8:53 AM >   A few LE (Long Exposure) photos. Fstop: 2.8. Exposure Time: 3-5 seconds for each. Film used: 400 ASA FujiFilm DefiniMax with a 4th color layer. Now in Surreal-o-vision. Courtesy of a Mercury Vapor streetlight in front of my place... E-Time: 4.5 sec, f/stop=2.0 Three second of a moon. E-timeT: 3 sec. f/stop=2.0 Duplicate of above. f/stop was 2.0 and exposure time was five seconds flat. Backyard thanks to MV streetlighting in Calhan, Colorado USA. E-Time: Three seconds. f/stop=2.0 "The man who trades freedom for security does not deserve nor will he ever receive either." -Ben Franklin lasthourstand  Location: Syracuse, NY Gender: Male You've got head pigeons!  |  |  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 5 on 6/21/2006 1:33 PM >   You need a lot of work in the composition and exposure dept. I did like the interesting takes on color you had though. Today is your way out... Twystr  Location: 39.2N, 104.17W Elev. 6535ft Gender: Male Gimme Biggah Drayyyyynes!  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 6 on 6/22/2006 9:08 AM >   The surreal color is thanks to the mercury vapor lights our town uses. Im just beginning, so it looks like theres a lot to learn. "The man who trades freedom for security does not deserve nor will he ever receive either." -Ben Franklin SLCblue  Location: Salt Lake City Gender: Male THINK OF THE SIDECAR!  |  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 7 on 6/24/2006 2:22 AM >   Yeah...composition needs a lot of help. Maybe try posting these in the photography forum? No Regrets  Location: San Francisco, CA / Boston, MA / New Haven, CT Gender: Female  |  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 8 on 6/24/2006 7:05 PM >   You were right in your first post when you called these "pix". I wouldn't call them photographs, and I wouldn't post them for a critique. lindsayphoto  Location: philly Gender: Female  |  |  Re: Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! <Reply # 9 on 6/26/2006 5:06 AM >   Along with whatever those guys said, you need to learn focusing because with that depth of field and everything else will follow. In the exposures, either the house, or trees in the background should be focused on. I often have a focusing problem because I don't wear my glasses usually so get an autofocus lense...or just learn to focus. UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Drain pix and Twystr...Rate ME! (Viewed 341 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 250 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 740023430 pages have been generated.