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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Paul A. Dever School (Viewed 286 times) swarchal   |  Paul A. Dever School < on 6/13/2006 10:12 PM >   *images taken down by me for being in the wrong section* [last edit 6/14/2006 6:35 AM by swarchal - edited 5 times] Ian  This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information. Location: The County of Kings Gender: Male "Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water, and stupid men."  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 1 on 6/14/2006 12:34 AM >   OK, now seriously. This forum is called "photo critiques", not "post blurry vidcaps from your shitty video that nobody wants to look at". If you have a serious desire to improve your *photography*, this is where you post pictures, receive critiques, take the information to heart, and learn from it. If you have a serious desire to post some worse-than-snapshot quality screencaps from a video of an abandonment that is basically a joke, this is not where you should do it. Honestly, dude. Nobody wants to see your screencaps. Dowcet  Location: Middletown, ct  |  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 2 on 6/14/2006 12:45 AM >   This is going to be the harshest critique I think I've ever written on here... but I wouldn't be wasting my energy unless I thought there was clear potential. In terms of image quality, these are all such utter garbage they just hurt to look at. If all you have is a video camera, you're insane not to take advantage of it and focus on making interesting video clips. If you want still images worth looking at, you should use a still camera. The subjects are pretty boring; there are already enough typical pics of medical chairs, broken windows, smokestacks, water towers, etc., almost all of which are taken on better cameras. #1 - Nice sense of balance, but, meh. In this case I would avoid having so many straight horizontal lines going all the whole way across the frame. #2 - I like the way the light feels, but there is no good focal point here. #3 - The crookedness and the fact that the edges of the chair are almost cropped out could be interesting violations of the rules, but in this case I don't think they work. #4 - I love these kinds of shots (tall structures against clear blue sky), but the lens flare and overexposure don't add anything: try a different angle or different time of day. I would also like to see the subject on the side of the frame instead of so close to the middle. #5 - If the frame continued on a little lower down so we could see the whole tire, this would be very nicely composed, but still boring. #6 - The frame feels very cramped, and I don't like the way that the water tower is not perfectly vertical. robdobi   |  |  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 3 on 6/14/2006 1:04 AM >   dobi.nu / fullbleed.org - series 12 now available. / flickr / tumblr / prints for sale Ian  This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information. Location: The County of Kings Gender: Male "Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water, and stupid men."  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 4 on 6/14/2006 1:32 AM >   Posted by robdobi dude you just made me spit water onto my laptop not cool maggiedotcom  Gender: Female  |  |  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 5 on 6/14/2006 1:34 AM >   is that a great white i spy? the_doctor  Location: Boston area Gender: Male It's probably dangerous  |  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 6 on 6/14/2006 1:43 AM >   Come on, post those on the photography section, not the critique section. If I have to critique them all I'm gonna say is, BUY A REAL CAMERA! ryan  This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information. Location: Providence RI Gender: Male F/gayz  |  |  |  Re: Paul A. Dever School <Reply # 7 on 6/14/2006 1:45 PM >   Posted by robdobi absolutely rediculous haha I climb stuff! Remember! Shop smart. Shop S-Mart \http://www.myspace.com/xitstheendx UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Paul A. Dever School (Viewed 286 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 156 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 741472769 pages have been generated.