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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > apartment for sale in my town (Viewed 249 times)
lindsayphoto 


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apartment for sale in my town
< on 6/10/2006 11:03 PM >
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This is my favorite town, at night they have the most interesting lights for exposure shots.

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Re: apartment for sale in my town
<Reply # 1 on 6/10/2006 11:20 PM >
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I really like 1. I love attics like that. I like how the light splits the floor at the bottom of the picture too. The yellow and brown tones seem a wee bit overpowering though. Possibly adjust the levels?

2 is nice too. Could be great for using in other artwork ;) It's got good texture

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Re: apartment for sale in my town
<Reply # 2 on 6/11/2006 3:22 AM >
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yes i really love number 1

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Re: apartment for sale in my town
<Reply # 3 on 6/11/2006 1:03 PM >
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Number 1: Very strong, good use of light, color, and formal shape. A keeper.

Number 2: Is just off symmetrical, making it look accidentally crooked. The lighting is nice, but doesn't really hold interest.

Number 3: A bit typical, losing some detail in the highlights in the lower right.

Number 4: Great use of formal shape and line, but it's a stop or so overexposed.

Number 5: Looks soft and needs a bit more punch to the contours of the sink, I'd say your negative is overexposed.

Number 6: Would be my favorite shot of the series if not for the blown out window in the background. Very nice angle and selected focus.

Number 7: Overexposed. I'd like it better if the left side of the overhang wasn't cut off.

Number 8: I like this shot a lot. Maybe a little to crooked for the formal look of the rest of the photo. Still overexposed in the lower-left.


Overall, I see a lot of potential in these photos. Try some different compositions, change your angles and such. Also watch your light meter and bracket to avoid over/under exposures. Keep shooting.

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