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 JonnyVpa
 
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
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< on 5/8/2006 4:24 AM >
|  | | | some old pics from about a month ago that i never got aroudn to editing
more coming soon
lemme know what you think.... these werent my favorite pics from the bunch but they will do
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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Glass
      
Location: Chicago
as one does
| |  | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 1 on 5/8/2006 7:34 AM >
| | | | People Comment Thanks Glass
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 2 on 5/8/2006 6:26 PM >
| | | | WTF.... these pics dont suck THAT much.... damn people where are you!!!!
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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Glass
Location: Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 3 on 5/8/2006 6:50 PM >
| | | | I think people are scerd because I did a two-day critique-a-thon here...
SNAP OUT OF IT!
Gwass
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 4 on 5/8/2006 7:19 PM >
| | | | and some more..... if anyone ever fucking looks at this post
PLEASE CRITIQUE GUYS!!!!
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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Jonsered
Location: Back in New Mexico where I belong
Gender: Male
Dressed for a scarecrow ball.........
| |  | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 5 on 5/8/2006 7:31 PM >
| | | | I suck as a photographer, so I have no business critiquing you, but here goes. I like the first pic, but its a little dark, especially in the background. Number two is killer! Great look there. Three looks like something I would shoot. Apparently interesting subject material, just looks kind of flat and nothing stands out. The first three of the second batch are nice. Sharp and clear. The last one again looks a little flat and kind of washed out.
Overall, nice set. Far better than my work.
I have changed my personal exploring ethics code. From now on it will be: "Take only aimed shots, leave only hobo corpses." Copper scrappers, meth heads and homeless beware. The Jonsered cometh among you, bringing fear and dread.
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dwagon
Location: Fort Worth Texas
Gender: Male
They call it Junk, I call it art
| | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 6 on 5/8/2006 7:46 PM >
| | | | I love the third one, but then again I am partial to anything rusted.
Good job
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lilli
Location: Surrey UK
Gender: Female
Aunt - Replace A with C
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 7 on 5/8/2006 8:43 PM >
| | | | Really liking the second from bottom  The window stands out well in B&W
Now you have a lot more replies than me!! lol
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maypost
Location: North, South, East, West, all around... then down to the underground
Gender: Male
Exploring if for n00bz0rz
| | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 8 on 5/8/2006 8:48 PM >
| | | | I like #2 the most but the only one that does not do it for me is #1( too dark fr me, but that's just me  )
Also love the title"fresh prints" hahaha
Exploring is like tattoos... They stopped being cool in 2005
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Glass
Location: Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 9 on 5/8/2006 9:27 PM >
| | | | What is that last pic of?
PS.
JESUS EYES!
[last edit 5/8/2006 9:28 PM by Glass - edited 1 times]
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Urban Pirate
Location: Salt Lake City
Gender: Male
| | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 10 on 5/8/2006 10:09 PM >
| | | | Posted by Glass
What is that last pic of?
PS.
JESUS EYES!
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It looks like a shot looking out of window, the exterior is just really blown out. If you look close you can see what looks like a tree outside. I guess I'm not sure, but that would be my guess. Looks a good opportunity for a bracket and blend.
Your first photo is really quite cool in my opinion. Maybe a little on the dark side, perhaps see if you can bring out some detail in the shadow areas, but don't over-do it because I kind of like the dark look.
Two is a good shot, interesting and well executed. I can't say much about your third because it is really too small for me to get a good look at what is going on. If you can get a bigger version you should post it up in this thread.
The first three of the next set are killer. Very nice work. I already commented on the fourth at the beginning.
Nice work, keep it up!
Pirate
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 11 on 5/9/2006 12:48 AM >
| | | | Hey guys... thank you soooo much... i really appreciate it, i was beginning to feel like they were so bad that no one would critique.....wait a minute everyone in UER usually tells you "YOU SUCK" ...... just a joke... im gonna try to fix what i can and then post them (size wise...) and i'll work on that first pic for ya... even though i like it as is
[last edit 5/9/2006 1:24 AM by JonnyVpa - edited 1 times]
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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pirate3
Location: oakville, ontario
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 12 on 5/9/2006 12:56 AM >
| | | | okay the first one looks like darth vadars death mask from half way and up
then I scrolled down to the rest of the photo and it actually started looking less like a sith lord
but then there's that other one with the face and that's creeping me out too
in your second to last the window looks like its about to fall over...
can you straighten it out?
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 13 on 5/9/2006 1:14 AM >
| | | | here for you guys that asked to see them larger.....
please keep checking up.... there may be more soon.... depending on how i feel
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 14 on 5/9/2006 1:19 AM >
| | | | Posted by pirate3
okay the first one looks like darth vadars death mask from half way and up
then I scrolled down to the rest of the photo and it actually started looking less like a sith lord
but then there's that other one with the face and that's creeping me out too
in your second to last the window looks like its about to fall over...
can you straighten it out?
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1. haha your kinda right
2. Alot of my intention is to creep people out.... I have a shoot w/ a model coming up and there are gonna be some scary ass pictures from that... as well as some some sexy ones too.... and i just shot about 30 scary ass pics yesterday at an abandoned house.... thats where "JESUS EYES" comes from... ask glass... they will be up whenever i get them developed
3. the bricks are holding the window up
If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn |
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lasthourstand
Location: Syracuse, NY
Gender: Male
You've got head pigeons!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 15 on 5/10/2006 11:07 AM >
| | | | You're losing most of your detail in your shadows, especially in 1, 3, 6, & 7. The composition in number two is week, too much negative space. I would also recommend against using flash, it's causing a lot of your lack of detail. Try working with longer exposures and ambient light. Interesting subject matter though.
[last edit 5/10/2006 11:10 AM by lasthourstand - edited 1 times]
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Glass
Location: Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 16 on 5/10/2006 1:18 PM >
| | | | Posted by lasthourstand
You're losing most of your detail in your shadows, especially in 1, 3, 6, & 7. The composition in number two is week, too much negative space. I would also recommend against using flash, it's causing a lot of your lack of detail. Try working with longer exposures and ambient light. Interesting subject matter though.
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Two weeks of negative space?! What do I look like, a Sasparilla?!
I like the flash, and lack of detail as it were!
Here's to DA, may it burn in a half-doodle 7-year old graphite hell.
-Graphs Graphs Graphs
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JonnyVpa
Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
| | | | Re: Fresh Prints of PA
<Reply # 17 on 5/10/2006 4:33 PM >
| | | | Post by lasthourstand
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You' re losing most of your detail in your shadows, especially in 1, 3, 6, & 7. The composition in number two is week, too much negative space. I would also recommend against using flash, it's causing a lot of your lack of detail. Try working with longer exposures and ambient light. Interesting subject matter though.
Okay.... i understand what your saying but .... I use flash when i want to... which is very rare. And as for Ambient light ... i already do.... ive been doin that since the beginning
FYI alot of these pictures really werent my favorite so i beefed them all up in PS and made them look somewhat good
thanks for the critique though
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