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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please! (Viewed 623 times)
DelbertGrady 


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Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
< on 5/7/2006 12:22 AM >
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I headed out to the Catskills today to finally finish exploring this place. It was a fairly short trip, but I think I got some good shots in. Let me know what you think. Thanks!


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Sanitarium 


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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 1 on 5/7/2006 12:44 AM >
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Good shots.. I like the last one of the stage the best. Neat composure.

Did ya make a pot of coffee in that coffee maker? Looks like everything is there, tho I'd recommend bringing your own Maxwell house....
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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 2 on 5/7/2006 6:15 PM >
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Sorry bro.... im critiquing so im gonna be honest with you as always.... and you know its all in good faith buddy.

1. bit too bright and it makes the shot look slightly out of focus.... good composition though

2. EXCELLENT ... i loveit.. if the basketball wasnt there i would hate the picture

3. Very nice... i like it becaus you know that cart isnt supposed to be in that spot

4. 4 is a little underexposed.... and the angle is a little wierd for me... shouldve gone down closer to the right of the chair and gotten a better glare off the window

5. Awsome... i like how the seats are similar to the cieling... really neat especially at like what 17mm? something like that... but very nice job i could shoot a roll of film in that room

6. a little boring for me ... not much to look at.. and its a little dark

7. a longer exposure wouldve been nicer for this one.. but i like it all in all just cuz of the coffee pot....

8. pretty cool.... not much you can do to make that picture look any better

9. i enjoy the picture but your shadow caught my eye when i first looked at it... you shouldve taken it at a different angle... but i like it other than that


I like it and every time i go exploring with you ... you know i try to teach you some new stuff and im seeing improvement.. cant wait to do the NEPA EXPLORATHON

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 3 on 5/7/2006 7:06 PM >
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I think your dynamic range is taking away from your composition... your midrange is taking over your photos.

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 4 on 5/17/2006 5:30 PM >
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I like your shots, but keep exploring! There are so many better shots waiting for you at the Pines!

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 5 on 5/22/2006 3:13 AM >
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I like numbers 2, 5, and 9. The angles and lighting are good, and it seems like you made some great shots out of a site without a lot of potential. Try taking in black and white sometime as well.

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 6 on 6/4/2006 7:39 AM >
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2 and 9 are great.
The basketball is kind of depressing, if you get what i mean.
I could almost see people dancing on that stage and putting on shows.
8 makes me feel like Bob Barker's going to walk out and tell people to "Come on down!".

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 7 on 6/4/2006 9:10 PM >
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#1 would be incredible in black and white if the sky wasn't overexposed.

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 8 on 6/4/2006 10:42 PM >
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I like 2, 4, and 9.
Love the single ball and shadow in number two.



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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 9 on 6/9/2006 4:54 AM >
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5 really makes me stop and look it all over. It just grabs me, I mean the light and shadow isn't amazing or anything...just the subject matter, so cool.

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Re: Quick Hotel Trip- Critique Please!
<Reply # 10 on 6/17/2006 3:21 AM >
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I have that same coffee maker in my kitchen! I think it's from the early 80's or so...anyway nice pics

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