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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > First Batch (Viewed 458 times)
Arthemys 


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First Batch
< on 4/27/2006 7:33 AM >
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These were taken at various times from the Westlake construction site in Burlington, Vermont.


Understandably blurry shot, hand held.


Facing south, Burlington cityscape.


A different set of stairs nearby.


It doesn't look real does it? Slightly blurry.


Seen on the walk home.


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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 1 on 4/27/2006 8:05 AM >
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3 is best of set.

5 is passable.

keep trying, and get a tripod!

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 2 on 4/29/2006 11:45 PM >
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They have a very moody feel which is nice. They are all suffering form camera shake to some degree but as Dev pointed out using a tripod will make huge difference to your picture quality. Alternatively you could try resting the camera on objects around you, Bricks, doorframes, etc - Whatever is handy. A higher ISO may also help you to reduce the blur.

The comparisons are all unremarkable - they dont really have a "wow" factor as such. You might want to look up the rule of thirds which may again help you to improve.

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 3 on 4/30/2006 7:11 PM >
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*gives you tripod*
*pushes you out door*

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 4 on 5/1/2006 2:09 AM >
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Another option that you may want to think about instead of a full tripod is the low buck method. Head over to a hardware store and buy about 6 feet of the ball and chain stuff that your sink drainplug hangs from. Also get a small bolt that screws into the tripod hole of your camera. Mount the chain to the bolt, and when you have a situation that requires a steady hand, just pull out the chain from your pocket and screw it into the camera, and stand on the other end, pull it tight and then you have a semi stable hold for some medium length shots.
Of course you could lug around a tripod if you choose, but this gives you an option that most people ignore.


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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 5 on 5/1/2006 5:06 AM >
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A nice tripod has been on the agenda. If you can look past the slight camera shake in the few that have it, what else can you say about the shots?

I'll make note to not submit any blurry shots here, even if I'm aware of the camera shake. And in my opinion, my first shot kinda looks cooler with the shake, though that's just me.

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 6 on 5/1/2006 7:41 PM >
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camera shake aside?

#1 Needs to have a bit off the bottom cropped off

#2 feels unbalanced....too busy on the lower and leftish end and too empty in the sky area. maybe less sky next time.

#3 i love it.....possibly crop out some of the black off the top.

#4 i just don't like in general.....it just doesn't strike me as interesting.

#5 is nice but the same as #4....boring. good composition though.

all of this of course is just my opionion. i'm by NO MEANS some great photographer that should be throwing around critisisms, but you asked and that's what i see.

keep up the work and PLEASE get a tripod

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 7 on 5/3/2006 12:42 AM >
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Posted by gutfree
all of this of course is just my opionion. i'm by NO MEANS some great photographer that should be throwing around critisisms, but you asked and that's what i see.

That's all I could ask for. Thank you, and everyone else so far. All notes have been noted.

Once I get this camera paid off, I'll invest in a nice tripod. Just a slight cost issue at the moment.
Camera > Tripod

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Re: First Batch
<Reply # 8 on 5/3/2006 9:53 PM >
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#1 is a really nice composition, but I wish it wasn't so dark and blurry.

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