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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > marrige, miscarrige, dinner. (Viewed 1292 times)
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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 20 on 4/29/2006 12:18 AM >
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don't waste my time with posting your work then

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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 21 on 4/29/2006 12:58 AM >
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Posted by pirate3
don't waste my time with posting your work then


i do not

hint hint
[last edit 4/29/2006 1:01 AM by laslow - edited 2 times]

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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 22 on 4/29/2006 6:16 AM >
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god, I need to save up for a 10-22

I kinda like the pics, I havent seen something like that before.

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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 23 on 4/29/2006 6:54 PM >
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I agree with the majority here.

I can't say much about the storyline, yeah, it's quite messed up, but that aside, it's just not drawing me in. Photo quality really isn't notable, either.


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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 24 on 4/29/2006 10:16 PM >
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I'm not really hyped about your story. Aside from being very disturbing, it's jilted and doesn't make much sense. It's really lacking anything tasteful. Although I see it as an attempt at a statement, it doesn't convey anything except for you, trying to make a statement. I think they could've been compositionally more interesting if you varied your angles a bit, the straight on gets repetitive. You're losing some details in your blacks. I think the idea of telling a story in this way is interesting, but you need a better, more compelling story. Would like to see more relationship between the two characters.
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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 25 on 4/29/2006 11:13 PM >
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Agreed about the underexposure; I'm sure it looks different in print/different monitor, so lighten up on the guy. I was half tempted to say I liked it just because the freaks in the peanut gallery hated it!

Conversely, Zorak took an abandoned looking location and tried to do something more with it by including a well, uh, disturbing storyline and doing something different than the usual peeling paint/rusty pipe bullshit.

I for one applaud the guy for taking things to a different level.

I like the narrative concept, although it's a little/lot twisted, but it least it's different from the norm.



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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 26 on 5/2/2006 8:17 PM >
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That's some goofy stuff.

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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 27 on 5/3/2006 5:48 PM >
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I'm disturbed by this photo set.

Some of them are really well done, others are just too dark (as in light, subject matter is very dark)

But if you're looking for emotional response, well you got it.

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Re: marrige, miscarrige, dinner.
<Reply # 28 on 5/17/2006 2:30 AM >
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Sorry to bump an old thread

Posted by pirate3

I think this is a really strong gusty direction and you should continue to explore it
if I can leav eyou with any advice it is "go big or go home"



I agree, I think you definitely have something unique going with these pictures and I think you should continue to explore this type of thing.

My only complaint is that you need some different angles so the pictures don't feel repetitive. Other than that, keep up it up. I like the direction you're going in.




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