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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Abandoned farm house (Viewed 385 times)
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Abandoned farm house
< on 4/24/2006 2:54 PM >
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down



shit



ajar



musty



suspended



treasure



rays of light



shanty



call the mechanic



through the window?



blue skies



angle



up



basment



face



trash



stud



squat



the path home




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Re: Abandoned farm house
<Reply # 1 on 4/24/2006 4:30 PM >
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last one is definitely the strongest of the bunch.

ps. clean your lens!

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Re: Abandoned farm house
<Reply # 2 on 4/24/2006 5:05 PM >
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Posted by robdobi
last one is definitely the strongest of the bunch.

ps. clean your lens!


yea i agree

and damn i didnt even realize those spots till you mentioned to clean it that sucks well i wont be cleaning it anymore considering it got stolen .. that sucks even more i have to save up for a new camera

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Re: Abandoned farm house
<Reply # 3 on 4/24/2006 10:03 PM >
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alot of it is underexposed
i like "face" though if you cropped it and re-shot it for more detail of the face it would be far better
I like "rays of light"
you could have just shot the rays of light on the wall for a less visually cluttered photo
or cropped
I like "treasure " too
also cropped
the lower half is just underexposed garbage
its those amazing colours and the play of light that really needs to be showcased
I think you can do more with that aspect of your photography

compositionally you clutter things up

"musty" and perhaps the last one are the most direct

naming photos is annoying
it asserts a subject or theme that can detract from a composition
part of the beauty of art is that it means something different to each viewer


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Re: Abandoned farm house
<Reply # 4 on 4/24/2006 10:28 PM >
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Posted by robdobi
last one is definitely the strongest of the bunch.

ps. clean your lens!


ps. clean your sensor too!

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Re: Abandoned farm house
<Reply # 5 on 4/24/2006 11:05 PM >
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You posted FAR to many photos. Try between 3 and 5 if want good and in-depth critiques.

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