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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Abandoned hotel (Viewed 656 times)
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Abandoned hotel
< on 4/7/2006 3:59 PM >
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I've been dying to take some shots like these and I finally got them and I'm posting them here to see what you all think. These were shot in a hotel that's been abandoned for about 20 or so years.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 1 on 4/7/2006 4:29 PM >
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Flawless technical work! I think the second one is the best, where the first might be improved with a lighter facial expression and straightened vertical angles; the third would be improved by straightening the frame a bit and maybe having her looking back.
Hope that's a fair critique,
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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 2 on 4/7/2006 4:52 PM >
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Posted by Glass
I think the second one is the best, where the first might be improved with a lighter facial expression and straightened vertical angles;


I agree, but also, maybe a little more contrast. It seems bland.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 3 on 4/7/2006 6:15 PM >
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nice thong tanline.


































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not a very flattering photo.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 4 on 4/7/2006 6:15 PM >
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Posted by atomx


I agree, but also, maybe a little more contrast. It seems bland.


Yes, true blacks are something I always look for in a photo... but the exposure is dead-on. If there was any contrast to be added it would be reasonable to Photoshop the histogram curve.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 5 on 4/7/2006 6:15 PM >
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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 6 on 4/7/2006 9:30 PM >
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Posted by Glass


Yes, true blacks are something I always look for in a photo... but the exposure is dead-on. If there was any contrast to be added it would be reasonable to Photoshop the histogram curve.

-Glass


As it should be done.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 7 on 4/8/2006 6:43 PM >
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Interesting photography. I can't really say I particularly like the set however, mainly because I'm not attracted to the model. In any event, flattering concept.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 8 on 4/8/2006 10:17 PM >
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Erm... what the hell is she wearing in the first picture?

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 9 on 4/8/2006 10:54 PM >
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I dont really care about the models, the photographs are technically well done, and the exposure is right on.

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 10 on 4/9/2006 4:01 AM >
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Looks like that new picture taking box you got works good!

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 11 on 4/9/2006 4:24 PM >
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Posted by Dokk
I've been dying to take some shots like these and I finally got them and I'm posting them here to see what you all think. These were shot in a hotel that's been abandoned for about 20 or so years.

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I can't believe someone abandoned this perfectly functional White girl...Damn shame....

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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 12 on 4/9/2006 4:40 PM >
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what the hell does "perfectly functional white girl" mean?
you probably mean't the whole thing as a joke,
but man does it ever sound super nasty

I'd recommend more light on her face with a reflector
and a less textured wardrobe
what I mean is the lace on her top wars with the texture on the wall
put her in a t-shirt the same colour as the one she iswearing now and see how that changes the shot


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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 13 on 4/9/2006 6:30 PM >
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Posted by Dokk
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It looks like she only has one leg...


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Re: Abandoned hotel
<Reply # 14 on 4/11/2006 1:13 AM >
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Posted by pirate3
what the hell does "perfectly functional white girl" mean?
you probably mean't the whole thing as a joke,
but man does it ever sound super nasty




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