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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Old hardware store (Viewed 541 times)
Wenn 


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Old hardware store
< on 3/27/2006 6:32 PM >
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Any advise is greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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[last edit 3/29/2006 4:14 AM by Mutt - edited 1 times]

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 1 on 3/27/2006 6:51 PM >
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Critique it I won't, but tell you how damn cool it is I will. N.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 2 on 3/27/2006 7:58 PM >
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Way cool is right!

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 3 on 3/27/2006 8:22 PM >
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Awesome location. To offer a brief critique: Your composition seems lacking in most of these. Think about what is in the camera frame when you take the picture and how to look at your subject in the most interesting way. For example: the photo has these awesome wavy lines running down the building that look really cool, but then on the left side there is that green stripe of another building that distracts me from your subject.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 4 on 3/30/2006 12:59 AM >
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Hey nice pics! The telephone box on the last shot looks pretty new... Makes me wonder how long it's been empty.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 5 on 3/30/2006 8:27 AM >
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I would have to agree with Urban Pirate - the subject matter is great, and although you've got your mind in the right place the shots are lackluster and remind me of documentation style snap shots. Consider shadows and time of day, etc.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 6 on 4/3/2006 7:01 PM >
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Thanks for the advice everyone. I went back the other day and tried some different angles...
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nobody 


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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 7 on 4/3/2006 9:13 PM >
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Love the first one? N.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 8 on 4/3/2006 9:20 PM >
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Great spot. I love the way it sags and rises. Almost looks alive.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 9 on 4/4/2006 2:43 PM >
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It almost made me laugh,..In a good way though you know?. N.

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Re: Old hardware store
<Reply # 10 on 4/6/2006 7:00 PM >
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haha i think that hardware store needs some new hardware

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