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 |  |  |  | please give me your honesty and opinion be as harsh as possilbe its the only way to improve thanks
< on 3/25/2006 10:45 PM >
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[last edit 3/26/2006 8:35 AM by ryan - edited 1 times]
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dogyeaars
| | Re: please give me your honesty and opinion be as harsh as possilbe its the only way to improve thanks
<Reply # 1 on 3/26/2006 10:04 AM >
| | | | Try to avoid compositions which are incomplete (Picture104.jpg, _MG_7715.jpg) or too symmetric (graffitiseanghost.jpg., _MG_7559.jpg).
Some of the pictures have a lot of potential. Keep working on it.
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Yehoshua
 
Location: Ontario
Gender: Male
| | Re: please give me your honesty and opinion be as harsh as possilbe its the only way to improve thanks
<Reply # 2 on 3/26/2006 10:09 AM >
| | | | First, put a paragraph line between each photo :Þ
The first image would've been better without the figure standing in it, and picture 91 (by file name) would've been nicer if it had've been from an angle to capture the *shadow* letters more.
But then, what do I know, I've been sued by every client I've ever had 
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pirate3
Location: oakville, ontario
Gender: Female
| | | Re: please give me your honesty and opinion be as harsh as possilbe its the only way to improve thanks
<Reply # 3 on 3/26/2006 9:30 PM >
| | | | there are number of photos that are cast in shadow
for ex. the third photo
you need to pull more information out of those shadows...longer exposure, flash, multiple exposure, melding two shots (one taken for highlights and the other for darks) ...so many choices
there are so many shots here
I'd recommend only posting 5 or 6 at a time so they can be critiqued amd identified more easily
the second half of your shots seem well exposed
in particular I like a shot right after a close up of a bath tub, it has these interesting strings and lines....and there are a number like that that have interesting compositions
like the old boot and shoe polish....these however suffer somewhat from composition, they are too clipped and don't tell the whole story..whatever that interpretation might be
try to consider context ...high abstraction is also a very interesting direction too
try to take one of these shots...like the boot and shoot as many different angles, vary the light, try a wide open aperture, try a very symmetrical shot, etc.... spend time on each subject, don't "speed shoot" your way through a location
essentially keep on shooting and you will find out what looks good
you have some great shots here and it looks like you've been exploring some interesting places
I look forward to seeing more work
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