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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > High Desert Nike (Viewed 438 times) Explorer Zero   |  |  High Desert Nike < on 3/22/2006 11:38 PM >   Hi/Po  Location: Earth Gender: Male  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 1 on 3/23/2006 1:33 AM >   First impressions: 1-Boring composition, looks very "snapshotty" 2-Bland lighting/tones 3-Very nice, excellent. Perhaps a polarizer could bring out the clouds. That or just a bit deep blue in the sky would be nice. Glass  Location: Chicago as one does  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 2 on 3/23/2006 1:53 AM >   I didn't like any of them. Sorry. Contrast and color was lacking, not really interesting subjects... lasthourstand  Location: Syracuse, NY Gender: Male You've got head pigeons!  |  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 3 on 3/23/2006 2:42 AM >   I really like the simple composition of number 3. Beautiful location and sky. Today is your way out... JonnyVpa  Location: Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown) Gender: Male ROTTEN FUCK!!!  |  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 4 on 3/23/2006 5:44 AM >   I agree with Glass on 1 and 2 .... but 3 if you got a little closer to the ground and maybe shot with a say 28 mm Wide angle and turned it B&W you might have something..... if you go back.... try it out .... i dont mean to sound like an asshole but ive learned a little bit about composition from looking at critiques on here AND getting critiqued myself... Take a picture as if its costing you 100 bux and you'll come out with nothing but the best....... unless you have that kind of money lol If I had a Rocket Launcher, some son of a bitch will die - Bruce Cockburn Andy "Not Dice" Dice  Location: We can live in dumpsters if we have to, MA Gender: Male UE'ing is for pussies, bro.  |  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 5 on 3/23/2006 6:56 AM >   The second one really bugs be because the edges of the door clash with the edges of the frame? Make it look more deliberate. Also......is that a graduated blue filter....? I'm not into that for that shot. A solid filter or none at all, but not a graduated one. Either that or it's just funky lighting and I look like an asshole now. The third one is very nice, though. Very nice. --- 456.photo.to --- Explorer Zero   |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 6 on 3/23/2006 2:19 PM >   no apologies necessary I encourage feedback you wont hurt my feelings I promise 1. is a snapshot, guess I got all wrapped up in the moment of finding that hole in the fence, in fact all of these are snapshots I was looking over my shoulder pretty much the whole time I was in there 2. no filter, handheld, available light only, I think there was a window w/mini blind and blue wall behind me in this barracks corridor 3. I only wished I was there at sundown, shot is looking north, wish I could have exaggerated the perimeter fence stretching out over the horizon better somehow and kept the lone bldg in the shot If I went back what should I (or would you) do differently (I know old missile bases arent as cool as dark asylums and there were no antique chairs in dark hallways) Glass  Location: Chicago as one does  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 7 on 3/23/2006 5:54 PM >   Posted by 2Xtreme If I went back what should I (or would you) do differently (I know old missile bases arent as cool as dark asylums and there were no antique chairs in dark hallways) I've photographed three NIKE bases, and I think the best shots I've taken are super long exposure night-shots. cmt9000  Location: Pittsburgh, PA Gender: Male  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 8 on 3/23/2006 5:55 PM >   I liked #3...the blue sky looks beautiful http://www.flickr....tos/cmt_pitt/sets/ Atrocity  Location: Plano Gender: Male  |  |  |  Re: High Desert Nike <Reply # 9 on 3/24/2006 3:23 AM >   I think number one could have been a little better composed, and the shot would have improved. I love the sky in the 3rd one but it too should be zoomed in on so you have a tighter composition. UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > High Desert Nike (Viewed 438 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 78 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 739804136 pages have been generated.