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 Spider Jerusalem
 
Location: Philly
Gender: Male
 |  |  |  | Looking for Constructive Crit. Delco/Sykes.
< on 2/10/2006 7:28 AM >
|  | | | Took these pictures a few week ago during one of my trips to Delco. Not sure why it happened, but my camera white balance was way, way off, so they turned out this strange green color, but I think they came out really cool.
I had to go into these in photoshop and take out some noise, but it's really not noticable.
Also, I would use the "gallery" tags, but the forums don't want to seem to let me post my images from my host using the gallery tags.
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ColdWater
  
Location: boston
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Looking for Constructive Crit. Delco/Sykes.
<Reply # 1 on 2/10/2006 1:41 PM >
| | | | Id pull back more on both of them
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desmet
 
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
| | | | Re: Looking for Constructive Crit. Delco/Sykes.
<Reply # 2 on 2/10/2006 2:32 PM >
| | | | They both seem a bit too dark. The first one, especially, would be better if you had taken two shots and blended them to get some shadow detail. I like the subject a lot, but you just need to brighten them up.
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laslow
Location: Tewksbury, MA
you have quite a temper for someone who takes pictures of flowers
| | Re: Looking for Constructive Crit. Delco/Sykes.
<Reply # 3 on 2/10/2006 3:11 PM >
| | | | Another perfect example of why everyone should learn to shoot in RAW.
#1 has a nice silhouette-look. My only complaints -- the silhouette is of nothing interesting; The picture is crooked; and this photo would benefit from a straight-on perspective. The current angle isn't doing much for it.
I like #2.
It's bordering centered, however -- and I believe keeping the break in the glass off-center would give the picture some character.
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Spider Jerusalem
Location: Philly
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: Looking for Constructive Crit. Delco/Sykes.
<Reply # 4 on 2/10/2006 8:25 PM >
| | | | not sure what any of that has to do with shooting in RAW format. Not sure how you could tell if they were originally raw or not just by looking at the images either.
I enjoy trying to abstract things in a lot of my images, and a feel that these were more about light than anything else, and was hoping that they conveyed the interesting lighting situation that you got at delco and 3 in the morning. Also, I bracketed the shots, so i have some that came out lighter, but the lighter they come out, the more the metal weave in the windows was reduced, as well as the reflections on the inside of the glass.
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