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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > just two (Viewed 336 times)
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just two
< on 2/10/2006 1:43 AM >
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Re: just two
<Reply # 1 on 2/10/2006 1:57 AM >
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Well I am no one to judge as I suck myself... but I think both images would be better if they were a bit sharper focus. I think the second one would be better as a full silhouette also.
Just my less than 2 cents!

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Re: just two
<Reply # 2 on 2/10/2006 2:00 AM >
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the second one was originally a full silhouette but it looked a bit silly without the definition of the respirator. I think im missing what you said about the sharpness, for shooting at f3.4 like 25 or something, i dont think its that bad. let me open the RAW and see what i can do though.

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Re: just two
<Reply # 3 on 2/10/2006 2:07 AM >
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also perhaps dont resize as Im over 30 and my eyesight sucks, lol!


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Re: just two
<Reply # 4 on 2/10/2006 2:10 AM >
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My suggestions would be to maybe get closer towards the left wall and aim at the door, with some zoom. This looks really wide an empty, not breathing any life into.

your portrait, I would have went back by the windows and let the light pour in on your face, I'm sure it would look awesome, play around a bit.



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Re: just two
<Reply # 5 on 2/10/2006 2:11 AM >
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I was going for the empty thing, not every UE photo can be of peeling paint

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Re: just two
<Reply # 6 on 2/10/2006 2:29 AM >
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Yeah you do raise a good point, I just ment closer to the wall and expose more of the room or something. I guess it has something to do with straight on composition. But it's all good dude

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Re: just two
<Reply # 7 on 2/19/2006 11:22 PM >
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Posted by ColdWater





Open Photoshop and put some text on that pic that says:

"This is the room of people who care"

Kind of like this one, hehe.




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Re: just two
<Reply # 8 on 2/20/2006 12:59 AM >
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Posted by ColdWater
the second one was originally a full silhouette but it looked a bit silly without the definition of the respirator. I think im missing what you said about the sharpness, for shooting at f3.4 like 25 or something, i dont think its that bad. let me open the RAW and see what i can do though.


UN SHARP MASK.

word up.

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