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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Old Skool (Viewed 515 times)
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Old Skool
< on 12/13/2005 5:37 AM >
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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 1 on 12/13/2005 5:50 AM >
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#2 is really pissing me off.

(at least) two reasons:

1: on center vertically, off-center horizontally.
2: without a tilt-shift, you get a slight convergence angle towards the top, making the sides of the window NOT_PARALLEL, which almost ruins it for me.

everything else looks at the least okay, but this pic in particular really bugged me for some reason. two reasons. at least. and i gave them.

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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 2 on 12/13/2005 7:00 PM >
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I see what you mean

thanks for the feedback

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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 3 on 12/27/2005 11:28 AM >
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Hey wow... this is one great subject. As for the photographs, my only suggestion would be to do a little more than hold the camera to your face... Get down lower, higher, closer, dirtier; think about the subject and how it could be presented.

These are all excellent documentary photographs, but lack a little feeling. It depends of course on what you are trying to present here; 'straight-up' postcards, or something with more? Neko.

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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 4 on 12/27/2005 4:44 PM >
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My favorite is definitely #8. I like the way the light splashing down from the top left and various shadows cause a diagonal light striation; From bottom left to top right, the wall ranges from dark to light to dark to light. And of course the door placement is centered very nicely on third lines.

My only compliant would be that the rafters looks a little washed out. I bet if it was a little less exposed the rafters would have a more warm feeling, but of course, you'd lose some detail on the door and floor.

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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 5 on 12/27/2005 9:46 PM >
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Nice pics!
Don't change a thing.

The more things change, the more they stay the same
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Re: Old Skool
<Reply # 6 on 12/28/2005 2:23 PM >
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thanks I definitely feel I can benefit from the feedback provided in this forum and appreciate the comments



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