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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > go nuts. (Viewed 381 times)
Drie 

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go nuts.
< on 12/10/2005 2:03 AM >
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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 1 on 12/10/2005 2:15 AM >
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1. I keep wanting to move the framing a little down and to the right, I think maybe it's too evenly split in half or maybe I just want to see more of the caved in area. The lighting is a little blah.

2. I really like this picture, my eyes roam all over the room-it keeps me interested. It's also funny how intact the room seems from this angle, like you could just turn on the lights, mop the floor and put on a ultra-cool eighties New Years party.

3. I really like the composition, but I think the lighting and color could be a lot better.

All in all nice work

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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 2 on 12/10/2005 5:07 AM >
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your work really strikes me. the last shot could use the parallel correction and a touch of debarrelization, as i view it more in the sense of an architectural shot. email me for details...

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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 3 on 12/10/2005 5:31 AM >
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They're all really well done from what I can see. Though I's fell more comfortable critiquing them if they were a bit larger.

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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 4 on 12/10/2005 5:47 AM >
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I disagree with xrahy on 1. I like the composition where it is, I think the negative space adds to the curiosity of the image. but maybe a bit more up or down would make it better.

2. I also really like, nice use of wide angle without bringing in too much distraction, well composed and colourful.

3. like afternothing, maybe a bit of debarrelization, and a bit more colour saturation too I'd say, but otherwise a nice shot

Drie 

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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 5 on 12/10/2005 6:13 AM >
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Yeah, the color on that last one is a bitch. I corrected it, but then it didnt look like the pines anymore, so i put it back. The room is purple, the mold is red. Go Figure

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Re: go nuts.
<Reply # 6 on 12/12/2005 2:40 AM >
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Drie, I really like # 3. Your photos are beautiful!

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