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Location: Saskatchewan
 |  |  | A couple from Saskatchewan
< on 12/1/2005 8:08 PM >
|  | | | I'll start by saying I am a free lanced amateur photographer at best, but I am curious of what I can look at to improve my shots.
Shot number one, Basement of Hangman's Hospital.
Shot number two, stone grinding wheels at a brick plant
Shot number three, Rosetown Pioneer on a cloudy day
These are shots that I am rather happy with, however I want to know what areas I can improve on.
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what
Location: Texas
Gender: Male
RE - Rural Exploration
| | Re: A couple from Saskatchewan
<Reply # 1 on 12/1/2005 8:24 PM >
| | | | #1 - looks great - maybe darken the room, let the shadows creep in a bit to emphasize the shaft of light.
#2 - i'm missing a focal point
#3 - love the color and the simplicity. i'd just move the building up in the frame. right now, it's too evenly divided.
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handskills
 
Location: Jer zay
Gender: Male
visual distress
| | | Re: A couple from Saskatchewan
<Reply # 2 on 12/2/2005 12:53 AM >
| | | | The pioneer building is great.
a stronger composition would
make the picture as cool as the
place.
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Obscura
Gender: Male
Nikonwhore
| | Re: A couple from Saskatchewan
<Reply # 3 on 12/5/2005 6:08 AM >
| | | | too much going on in shot #2. try moving closer to something and focusing on that (maybe I should say concentrating on that instead...lol)
shot #3 is okay... learn the rule of thirds. I would have gone back on a sunny day and shot it using a polarizing filter from straight on. Super blue sky, bright yellow roof and red sides with the green foreground would've looked good.
Obscura
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Location: Bunbury, Western Australia
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| | | Re: A couple from Saskatchewan
<Reply # 4 on 12/7/2005 4:09 AM >
| | | | Brighten up the grain elevator shot with software, or as stated before, reshoot it with the sun and polarize filter.
The basement shot might do with bumping up the contrast a bit which will bring out the ray of sun a bit more and darken the shadowy area a bit.
The one in the middle does nothing for me, sorry. Nothing to look at really. What is there is a bit overexposed at the bottom. Perhaps go in close for a macro of the grinding wheels or what have you, macro shots of textures can be interesting.
Its great to see someone from the flatlands out exploring...
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