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 350D
  
Location: Toronto Ontario
Gender: Male
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< on 11/29/2005 2:11 PM >
|  | | | Im new to this site and thought this critique thing was cool so here you go. Keep in mind i dont really understand the very technical aspect of photography (i dont even own photoshop), but what the hell...
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Glass
     
Location: Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: a couple of shots
<Reply # 1 on 11/29/2005 2:21 PM >
| | | | In the first picture I really love the specular light. What I don't like is the composition: it doesn't seem refined--more like a snapshot than 'artsy.' It's not balanced in shape, tone, or line so the resulting image is chaotic. I think a 20 degrees tilt with a closeup on something of interest would help a lot.
The second selection is print-worthy! The only thing I'd do is pop the contrast a little bit, bust to make the shadows of the stairs pop a little! Great job!
Oh-as per presentation: try to get a black texture border on it... it would help a lot. PS isn't a must for this.
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Greg
Location: Canada
Gender: Male
How is this even 'exploration'? It's a loving house you've already been in you weirdo!
| | | Re: a couple of shots
<Reply # 2 on 11/29/2005 7:33 PM >
|  | | | Photo two is the better one out of the two.
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Dowcet
Location: Middletown, ct
| |  | Re: a couple of shots
<Reply # 3 on 11/30/2005 12:30 AM >
| | | | Posted by mynameisglass
In the first picture I really love the specular light. What I don't like is the composition: it doesn't seem refined--more like a snapshot than 'artsy.' It's not balanced in shape, tone, or line so the resulting image is chaotic.
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I would disagree, personally, I think #1 is a great composition. #2 seems little out of focus actually, but its really nice overall. I think glass is right that the contrast or something needs to be tweaked just a bit.
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350D
Location: Toronto Ontario
Gender: Male
| | | Re: a couple of shots
<Reply # 4 on 11/30/2005 12:48 AM >
| | | | thnks for the input. The first picture was kinda rushed, it was taken up at CFB Foymount in norther Ontario. I had someone busting my balls to leave so i didnt have much time to take pictures. that place would defintly be worth going back with some more time.The second one is blurry now that i see it. My rebel XT's been acting up so i duno. Anyone know wat ERROR 02 means?
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