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 Down State
   
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< on 11/28/2005 5:36 AM >
|  | | | thought id get some feedback from anyone who wants to give it, although I warn you not everything on the portfolio is "UE"... and i lost my film scanner so these are all scans of the prints. with that in mind follow the link and let me know what you think!
http://www.harlemvalley.org/portfolio/
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mada
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Location: Orange County, California
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 11/28/2005 7:15 AM >
| | | | Lazy ass.
Which one's do you want feedback on?
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Down State
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<Reply # 2 on 11/28/2005 7:22 AM >
| | | | i was trying to be dial up friendly! i swear. 
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mada
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Location: Orange County, California
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 3 on 11/28/2005 7:30 AM >
| | | | All seem well composed.
1, 2 and 3 are excellent and if I had to change one thing it might be a tad more contrast. But since these are just jpgs and not final prints or anything it doesn't really matter.
4 feels a little off. I think too much weight put on the broken floor and not enough on the chair. Still very nice though.
I am being extremely picky, mind you. Nice work.
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Greg
  
Location: Canada
Gender: Male
How is this even 'exploration'? It's a loving house you've already been in you weirdo!
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<Reply # 4 on 11/29/2005 7:36 PM >
|  | | | Photo two is my favorite.
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what
Location: Texas
Gender: Male
RE - Rural Exploration
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<Reply # 5 on 11/29/2005 8:33 PM >
| | | | A touch of contrast would help the first one. I really like how the photograph itself feels old. (too me anyway) the overgrown tire ruts in the lower right are a nice touch.
#4 Feels a bit too balanced with the break of the floor almost in the center of the frame. If it were mine, I'd tilt the camera down to emphasize the drop that chair faces.
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n_millard
Location: Rhode Island
Lighting it Up
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<Reply # 6 on 11/29/2005 11:45 PM >
| | | | i like the first one, but some more contrast would be nice
the second one is my favourite, i love candid pictures of people actually taking pictures, also the surrounded area is very nice, and the way he is shillouetted
the angle of the third one is a nice one, gives a great perspective on the whole room, better than an eye-level shot
and the last one is def a great one too, but possibly some nice burning on the chair to bring out some contrast and details on it would be nice. otherwise, great shots
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Kleio
Location: Vancouver, BC
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 7 on 11/29/2005 11:56 PM >
| | | | #2 and #3 are pretty striking. I'd agree that perhaps there's too much focus on the floor for #4, but otherwise it's great. Good job!
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Mike Dijital
    
UEDB Moderator
Location: Boston MA.
Gender: Male
UE ver. 1.0
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<Reply # 8 on 11/30/2005 1:17 AM >
| | | | Maybe im odd, but the focus on the floor in four is what sparks my imagination of the endless hole waiting to devour its next victim.
And the chairs at the top say , " please have a seat Death will be right with you "
Well, anyway , like I said im a little odd
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robdobi
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<Reply # 9 on 11/30/2005 1:57 AM >
| | | | Posted by Mike Dijital
Maybe im odd, but the focus on the floor in four is what sparks my imagination of the endless hole waiting to devour its next victim.
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it has already devoured a few!
anywho, only thing that really bothers me about the photos is what everyone else said, the contrast and the the blacks aren't quite black yet(look at border in #2 compared to the figure) sure you'll get the hang of it soon.
plus the dude in #2 is really sexy.
dobi.nu / fullbleed.org - series 12 now available. / flickr / tumblr
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