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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Comments anyone ? (Viewed 662 times)
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Comments anyone ?
< on 11/28/2005 4:05 AM >
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Here are a coupe of photos I did recently this year and would like to read your opinions about them I will post other pictures of mine later on when ill have the time to as I learn a lot from people's opinions and advices.


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edit: I added the modified version of the second photo
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Re: Comments anyone ?
<Reply # 1 on 11/28/2005 4:10 AM >
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Out of context, they really aren't too impressive. They seem like snap shots, more or less.

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<Reply # 2 on 11/28/2005 12:33 PM >
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Actually, the first one looks a lot like a snapshot. Nothing interesting there.

The other picture is pretty sweet. I love the modified version a little more.

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Re: Comments anyone ?
<Reply # 3 on 11/30/2005 10:27 PM >
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yeah, the first one is meh, looking more towards the last two, same picture, but the b&w of the last one and the "overexposed" edges look really sweet, nice

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<Reply # 4 on 12/8/2006 5:09 PM >
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I like the composition of the second one!

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<Reply # 5 on 12/8/2006 5:20 PM >
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That first one.. It's been said.

Anyhow, the other two are neat in concept, but I think the composition fails to capture what you were trying to capture.

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<Reply # 6 on 12/8/2006 5:45 PM >
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crotch shot! and out of context, I'm really not too sure what I'm looking at in #'s 2 & 3.

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<Reply # 7 on 12/8/2006 6:33 PM >
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I like the way you edited the third one... and I think it's a good shot too.

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<Reply # 8 on 12/8/2006 7:39 PM >
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I like the third one the best. It's a very abstract, geometric shot that makes you look twice if you don't know that it's a UE photo and a doorway. I like the frame-in-frame concept, although the right edge of the second wall (crenellated) seems to bug me a bit. Possible re-shoot? Also, I am not terribly fond of the faded edge, but perhaps that's just my personal preference to have Photoshopping be subtle and discrete.

Likewise I seem to ge the nagging impression that something is missing. More tonal depth? I don't know. But overall I think that it's a great idea and good composition.

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<Reply # 9 on 12/13/2006 2:40 AM >
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I actually prefer the second one, but do like the faded border.
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<Reply # 10 on 3/12/2007 2:01 PM >
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im not liking them at all sorry

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<Reply # 11 on 3/12/2007 9:54 PM >
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they don't really do anything for me, but i do have some constructive criticism. I think 3 would have looked great if you got in closer to the actual hole so that the edges of that hole become the "frame" around the entire shot. from there, i'd close up the aperture so that the rest of those holes in the lineup are nice and crisp.



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