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 KBaller
  
Location: Chicago
Gender: Male
Go White Sox!
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< on 11/26/2005 3:51 AM >
|  | | | How do these look?
[last edit 11/26/2005 3:54 AM by KBaller - edited 2 times]
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Noah Vale
  
Location: Portland, Or
It's nobler to never get paid, than to bank on shit and dismay
| | | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 1 on 11/26/2005 3:52 AM >
| | | | Good, but I'm not entirely sure what I'm supposed to be looking at. Seems to be lacking a focal point.
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KBaller
Location: Chicago
Gender: Male
Go White Sox!
| | | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 2 on 11/26/2005 3:55 AM >
| | | | would cropping help or should I just take a different photograph altogether?
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Redknight
 
Location: Missouri
Gender: Male
| | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 4 on 11/26/2005 4:15 AM >
| | | | I wanna say, just decide on a clear subject next time. The second one has things that could be interesting, but theyre all cluttered together. Maybe more wideangle photo of the trees and factory, or just stepping back to include more of one or the other.
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EatsTooMuchJam
Location: Minneapolis, MN
Gender: Male
Squirty "Stickybuns" von Cherrypants
| |  |  | | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 5 on 11/26/2005 4:16 AM >
| | | | Posted by KBaller
How do these look?
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Completely boring and bland. Do you think they're interesting?
"The large print giveth and the small print taketh away."
-Tom Waits |
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mada
Noble Donor
Location: Orange County, California
Gender: Male
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| |  | | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 6 on 11/26/2005 4:17 AM >
| | | | Trash these. Work on your composition. Try again.
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Explorer Zero
| | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 7 on 11/26/2005 4:42 AM >
| | | | Posted by EatsTooMuchJam
Completely boring and bland. Do you think they're interesting?
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bland was going to be my comment too
subject is the problem here I think
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Arch-Image
Location: DFW
Gender: Male
"This gene pool could use a little chlorine."
| | | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 8 on 11/26/2005 6:14 PM >
| | | | it appears in the first you were shooting maybe the broken pane as your focal point, I would suggest framing it tighter to focus on that cropping out the second building in the back.
In the second perhaps you were shooting the stairway? you could crop a bit to tighten the shot up but theres not to much to pull you into the shot, alot going on thats sort of distracting. I like trees sometimes in the edges to give some depth but this is over kill.
Both shots exposure is off and flat, use levels in photoshop or someting like it to bring out the details.
"Your kid may be an honor student but YOU'RE still an IDIOT!" |
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binaryzero
Location: Chicago, IL
Gender: Male
| | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 9 on 11/28/2005 12:11 AM >
| | | | If you're going for an artistic shot with these, they really don't make me think. If either of these were hanging somewhere I don't think anyone would be able to describe in any kind of detail after leaving.
[last edit 11/28/2005 1:16 AM by binaryzero - edited 1 times]
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 10 on 2/26/2007 4:24 PM >
| | | | 1 would be an ok photo if you crop out the other building in the background.
2 i dont have much to say about this one, im not digging the tree in front, it confuses me, what am i looking at
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sphinx
Location: Bellevue, WA
Gender: Male
| | Re: Two Photos
<Reply # 11 on 2/26/2007 10:32 PM >
| | | | I don't think he's looking for advice anymore. This is from 2005.
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