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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > "hard" critic needed ;-) (Viewed 575 times)
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"hard" critic needed ;-)
< on 6/11/2013 6:09 PM >
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Hellow there!

I like some hard critic please. I think this photographs are perfect.. So I'm excited why they aren't..

1. hungry Bird.. Genius, not?


2. plant.. fantastic???


3.


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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 1 on 6/11/2013 9:05 PM >
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Greetings from Switzerland / The land of chocolatmountains, rivers of fluid cheese!


Sounds like a delicious place.

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 2 on 6/11/2013 9:18 PM >
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These are truly fantastic photos (especially the plant). Your water mark is excellent. It adds a very unique effect to those awesome photos, but I wish you could see it a bit better on the first one. I feel like it would really give it the finishing touch that it needs.

Thanks so much for sharing! Keep up the good work!


give me something "hard"er to critique next time

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 3 on 6/11/2013 9:43 PM >
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It is hard to be sure from the small photos, but here we go...

1) The highlights look blown. I would have shifted the subject a bit higher up in the frame to get more of the bottom. The right-to-left orientation doesn't feel natural.

2) Is that a lens flare or sensor dust to the left of the plant? Either way, it is distracting.

3) The all over watermark ruins this photo. Though to be honest, it isn't that interesting to begin with.

As for the all over watermarking, it is shit. No one is stealing these photos, so don't bother.

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 4 on 6/11/2013 11:06 PM >
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As for the all over watermarking, it is shit. No one is stealing these photos, so don't bother.


I agree. That watermark is atrocious.



Otherwise, I do like the first two quite a bit.

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<Reply # 5 on 6/12/2013 4:13 AM >
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Its not hard enough, add HDR

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 6 on 6/12/2013 4:56 AM >
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needs more viagra.
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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 7 on 6/12/2013 3:00 PM >
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Posted by fatwax4
Its not hard enough, add HDR



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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 8 on 6/12/2013 3:59 PM >
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First off, I'll echo the statements to get rid of the watermark.

1. Shift the subject in the frame and use the dark to form a natural vignette around the subject. Also, lower the exposure to get some of the detail back from the hotel.

2. Strongest of the set, but there's some irregularity on the left that's distracting.

3. Again the watermark, also, the exposure is way off, the shadows are fairly muddy also.

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 9 on 6/15/2013 3:53 PM >
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Posted by Astro
These are truly fantastic photos (especially the plant). Your water mark is excellent. It adds a very unique effect to those awesome photos, but I wish you could see it a bit better on the first one. I feel like it would really give it the finishing touch that it needs.

Thanks so much for sharing! Keep up the good work!


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Posted by yokes
It is hard to be sure from the small photos, but here we go...

1) The highlights look blown. I would have shifted the subject a bit higher up in the frame to get more of the bottom. The right-to-left orientation doesn't feel natural.

2) Is that a lens flare or sensor dust to the left of the plant? Either way, it is distracting.

3) The all over watermark ruins this photo. Though to be honest, it isn't that interesting to begin with.

As for the all over watermarking, it is shit. No one is stealing these photos, so don't bother.


1. Thanks
2. No, that's a spiderweb..
3. Yea, I agree.. It isn't the best photo I've taken. Was the first time I've been in such a place with all the facilitys.. Mostly are the places empty I've been.. So that's why I've exaggerated the watermarks^^

Posted by relik

I agree. That watermark is atrocious.

Otherwise, I do like the first two quite a bit.


Thanks. The watermarks make me sleep well


Posted by fatwax4
Its not hard enough, add HDR


Not really.. HDR is stale.. Further aren't there heavy contrast, overall details, mostly the photographs looks dull or like paintings. I take photographs, not paintings ;-P


Posted by Axle
First off, I'll echo the statements to get rid of the watermark.

1. Shift the subject in the frame and use the dark to form a natural vignette around the subject. Also, lower the exposure to get some of the detail back from the hotel.

2. Strongest of the set, but there's some irregularity on the left that's distracting.

3. Again the watermark, also, the exposure is way off, the shadows are fairly muddy also.

1. This isn't a vignette, the capture ist the capture I've taken trough the viewfinder of the camera.
2. thanks. Spiderweb.
3. Thanks.

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 10 on 6/16/2013 5:24 AM >
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Which smartphone do you use for the pics and how many megapixel has the camera?

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Re: "hard" critic needed ;-)
<Reply # 11 on 6/16/2013 7:26 PM >
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Posted by yokes
It is hard to be sure from the small photos, but here we go...

1) The highlights look blown. I would have shifted the subject a bit higher up in the frame to get more of the bottom. The right-to-left orientation doesn't feel natural.

2) Is that a lens flare or sensor dust to the left of the plant? Either way, it is distracting.

3) The all over watermark ruins this photo. Though to be honest, it isn't that interesting to begin with.

As for the all over watermarking, it is shit. No one is stealing these photos, so don't bother.


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