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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Looking for some honest feedback, wont be offended if you dont like. (Viewed 289 times)
mhester 


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Looking for some honest feedback, wont be offended if you dont like.
< on 3/7/2013 6:04 PM >
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These are just some recent shots I have taken.

1.


No Fire to bare by mhester, on Flickr

2.


Doors leading to doors leading to doors by mhester, on Flickr

3.


No sparks flying here by mhester, on Flickr

4.


Iced over by mhester, on Flickr

5.


Abandoned wood shop by mhester, on Flickr

6.


Door to oblivion by mhester, on Flickr

Thanks in advance

Long time Urban explorer, who wants to push my love for the abandoned world into the art community.
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Re: Looking for some honest feedback, wont be offended if you dont like.
<Reply # 1 on 3/7/2013 6:46 PM >
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1. If you would have shifted yourself to the left and straightened your shot out it could have been better. And there's a lot of noise in this one.


2. Again. Similar Thing. Bring camera down. Put that corner in the middle. I feel like that would have been more along the lines of what you were trying to do. It just being off kilter throws the shot off.


3. don't care for.



4. It's a neat shot besides being washed out.


5. Processing is meh. If you could have got a little closer to the drill bit, focused on the drill bit and paper work, and got rid of the distracting background/ angles it could have been possibly cool.

6. I'm not sure with this one. Maybe... If you shot it portrait angle and included more of the stairs above the door and didn't include the right half of the image at all would be more to the point.

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Re: Looking for some honest feedback, wont be offended if you dont like.
<Reply # 2 on 3/7/2013 6:54 PM >
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Posted by randomesquephoto
1. If you would have shifted yourself to the left and straightened your shot out it could have been better. And there's a lot of noise in this one.


2. Again. Similar Thing. Bring camera down. Put that corner in the middle. I feel like that would have been more along the lines of what you were trying to do. It just being off kilter throws the shot off.


3. don't care for.



4. It's a neat shot besides being washed out.


5. Processing is meh. If you could have got a little closer to the drill bit, focused on the drill bit and paper work, and got rid of the distracting background/ angles it could have been possibly cool.

6. I'm not sure with this one. Maybe... If you shot it portrait angle and included more of the stairs above the door and didn't include the right half of the image at all would be more to the point.


Thanks for the feedback man. In the first one I added a noise filter in photoshop, I do a lot of art shows and they like that stuff. Same with 4 that was done that way. But I appreciate the feedback, honest opinions go along way in improving ones craft.



Long time Urban explorer, who wants to push my love for the abandoned world into the art community.
UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Looking for some honest feedback, wont be offended if you dont like. (Viewed 289 times)



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