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 PooYo
 
Location: Midwest
Gender: Male
 |  | Interested in some feedback
< on 8/23/2012 8:09 PM >
|  | | | Any and all comments and criticisms are welcome. Thanks for checking them out.
Camera_Canon T3i 600d
Lens_Tamron 10mm-24mm
This is the result of my efforts to do something artistic to make the photo more interesting. I edited one exposure in cs5 with HDR toning. The color was desaturated and then colored back in with vibrance where you see it.
Red Staircase by Justin the Moment, on Flickr
Exposure_20
Aperture_f/5.6
Focal Length_11 mm
ISO Speed_100
This was my first attempt at Blend and Bracket. I used a darker exposure to bring back the doors on both sides and a bit of the hole in the roof. My original exposure had to be significantly brighten. If I could take the photo again I would've dropped the f-stop a little more, or just light painted the room, after spinning steel wool.
Palace Theater by Justin the Moment, on Flickr
Exposure_30
Aperture_f/5.0
Focal Length_10 mm
ISO Speed_100
This is my second attempt at Blend and Bracket. I used a darker exposure to bring back the street and a part of the park.
Satisfying Sunrise by Justin the Moment, on Flickr
Exposure_13
Aperture_f/6.3
Focal Length_10 mm
ISO Speed_200
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Location: Minneapolis
Gender: Male
forget regret.
| | Re: Interested in some feedback
<Reply # 1 on 8/24/2012 7:50 PM >
| | | | #1.
Love the composition as well as the texture on the walls. The photo is lacking some pop to me though. I think adjusting the shadows and highlights a tiny bit would go a long way here. Also, I would probably bump the color up a bit - if only on the rug itself.
#2.
Good job bringing detail back in the doors. I don't think you want to drop your f-stop anymore. I think you should raise your f-stop quite a bit here because you are loosing a lot of sharpness(quite noticable when viewed large).
#3.
I would bump up the f-stop here quite a bit as well.
Overall, I like them though. Good job!
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