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 bornmilitia
   
Location: SoCal
Gender: Male
Never Be Found
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< on 5/1/2012 1:24 AM >
|  | | | just would love a little input!
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TexasMike
  
Location: DFW Metroplex
Gender: Male
Have Camera Will Explore
| | | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 1 on 5/1/2012 2:37 AM >
| | | | I like them all, especially #1. Just says desolation and loneliness.
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citrusleak
 
Location: Indy
Gender: Male
Indy Explorer
| | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 2 on 5/1/2012 3:02 AM >
| | | | 1 is great.
2-3 are decent.
4's exposure/coloring seems a little off.
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VampiresKiss335
Gender: Female
| | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 3 on 5/1/2012 4:48 AM >
| | | | #2 is cool and would look awesome in black & white!
And personally, I think the colors in #4 look GREAT. I like it. 
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RomanKam
Location: Los Angeles
Gender: Male
Allison's Gulch
| | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 4 on 5/1/2012 5:39 AM >
| | | | 1. looks out of focus. Try several shots at different aperatures to get depth of field and use a tripod if you can.
4. Good natural lighting with rays of light peaking in. I seem to be partial to this ... just a trend lately.
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Adv.Pack
Location: Connecticut
Adventure Pack
| | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 5 on 5/1/2012 12:36 PM >
| | | | 1. Is out of focus. Also there is no information to the left if the door. It is distracting and not straight.
The subject seems to be the sink but it is really dark. Make the subject brighter and try to bring back a little info from the window.
2. Fix your perspective. It looks like you were tilting down a bit.
3. Is a little boring. Also the quality of the lens takes away even more from this on the edges.
4, Is a little contrasty.
Good start though.
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ahhntzville
Location: Boston
| | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 6 on 5/1/2012 3:51 PM >
| | | | Posted by Adv.Pack
3. Is a little boring.
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Actually it's a lot boring.
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tullo
Location: Belleville New Jersey
Gender: Female
| |  | | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 7 on 5/1/2012 4:48 PM >
| | | | 3 has no subject. or no interesting subject. thats why its boring.
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bornmilitia
Location: SoCal
Gender: Male
Never Be Found
| | | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 8 on 5/1/2012 7:21 PM >
| | | | Posted by tullo
3 has no subject. or no interesting subject. thats why its boring.
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My 12 piece concentraition was on abandonment, and as a theme I used windows. I put 3. Towards the end of the portfolio to add some feelings of desolation - almost like an escape is needed. The 18x24 print looks nice, and although it's not "urbexy", I think I'll still include it.
"Happiness and sanity are an impossible combination." - Mark Twain
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tullo
Location: Belleville New Jersey
Gender: Female
| | | | Re: Please critique for AP photo
<Reply # 9 on 5/1/2012 7:27 PM >
| | | | Posted by bornmilitia
Towards the end of the portfolio to add some feelings of desolation - almost like an escape is needed.
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youre overanalyzing and overreaching.
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