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 Weirdlig
   
Gender: Female
 |  | Where to go from here?
< on 4/10/2012 11:39 PM >
|  | | | Looking for critique on the usual. Lines, composition, HDR level, saturation/color, whatever else can be brought up.
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Adv.Pack
Location: Connecticut
Adventure Pack
| | Re: Where to go from here?
<Reply # 1 on 4/11/2012 2:21 AM >
| | | | #1. You got some reflections that I would have gotten rid of by just moving position a little.
#2. Is too dark.
#3. Your focus falls off in the foreground. The ceiling is a little annoying.
#4. Way too saturated outside.
#5. A little fuzzy around the edges and also a little boring and a little dark.
#6. Just a tad dark. Pretty good though.
#7. Too saturated.
[last edit 4/11/2012 2:24 AM by Adv.Pack - edited 1 times]
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Weirdlig
Gender: Female
| | Re: Where to go from here?
<Reply # 2 on 4/11/2012 2:48 AM >
| | | | Thanks, I'm working pretty hard to balance window shots. Not sure if you ever do HDRs or not, any pointers?
As for dark, I think I have a brighter than most monitor. They look perfectly exposed on mine but if I view them on my girlfriend's laptop everything is different. I'm thinking my monitor is abnormal, not vice versa, I get that critique alot.
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\/adder
   
Location: DunkarooLand
Gender: Male
I'm the worst of the best but I'm in this race.
| |  | Re: Where to go from here?
<Reply # 3 on 4/11/2012 5:44 AM >
| | | | #4 isn't level.
Every vertical shot in this set could and should be cropped tighter: too much blank space at the top and/or bottom.
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Adv.Pack
Location: Connecticut
Adventure Pack
| | Re: Where to go from here?
<Reply # 4 on 4/11/2012 12:15 PM >
| | | | Posted by Weirdling
Thanks, I'm working pretty hard to balance window shots. Not sure if you ever do HDRs or not, any pointers?
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I don't do HDR but the most important thing to remember with HDR is to not over do it. Look at the scene before you shoot. If the finished picture is more saturated, contrasty, sharpened, etc... than you see it in real life, then you have over done your processing.
[last edit 4/11/2012 12:16 PM by Adv.Pack - edited 1 times]
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ahhntzville
Location: Boston
| | Re: Where to go from here?
<Reply # 5 on 4/11/2012 1:11 PM >
| | | | I think #1 is the best shot you've posted here so far. I wouldn't change anything about it other than maybe a closer crop, like to an 8x10 ratio. But really a very nice shot.
I would definitely crop the ceiling out of #3.
The exteriors through the windows in #4 are way too saturated and too dark to look natural (same in #7). But at least they're not purple-gray and reminiscent of nuclear winter like they are when a lot of people use HDR.
I like #6 other than the crookedness. When taking a shot like that you should really try to get at least one line level; the overhead lights are a good reference point.
#5 is a little crooked too; the ceiling tiles and the floor tiles both slant down to the right.
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