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post by SouthboundSparrow   |  | 
First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
< on 2/27/2022 5:17 AM >

Hello! This is my first time posting here so I hope I'm doing this right. These are some photos I took while exploring an old industrial thing in Tulsa Oklahoma and I would love some feedback.

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These were all shot on a Nikon d5000



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post by dirtbagdav   |  | 
Re: First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
<Reply # 1 on 3/1/2022 12:00 AM >

I dig ‘em. I like the gloomy vibe, and I like the natural lighting style (no flash or additional lighting)

Personally I’d rotate #3 a bit, straighten it out. #5 would be cool if you could see more building, less brush, but I don’t know if you can do much there.

The colours are great.


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post by SouthboundSparrow   |  | 
Re: First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
<Reply # 2 on 3/1/2022 4:09 AM >

Posted by dirtbagdav
I dig ‘em. I like the gloomy vibe, and I like the natural lighting style (no flash or additional lighting)

Personally I’d rotate #3 a bit, straighten it out. #5 would be cool if you could see more building, less brush, but I don’t know if you can do much there.

The colours are great.


Thanks for the feedback! Definitely going back to get some clearer pictures of the buildings.


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post by sunlight   |  | 
Re: First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
<Reply # 3 on 3/2/2022 12:49 PM >

Great photos!

I like the composition of image 3 that you're peeking through a frame, around a corner, and through another window. Looking at your photo, it feels quiet.


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post by SouthboundSparrow   |  | 
Re: First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
<Reply # 4 on 3/3/2022 11:29 PM >

Posted by sunlight
Great photos!

I like the composition of image 3 that you're peeking through a frame, around a corner, and through another window. Looking at your photo, it feels quiet.


It was quiet. The only sounds were the wind through the trees, distant creaking doors, and the occasional shifting of debris that sounded like footsteps.


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post by DescentOnARope   |  | 
Re: First Images! Abandoned Warehouse (sort of)
<Reply # 5 on 3/4/2022 1:10 AM >

Nice work. They've got that dark, overcast look to them. You can definitely use a larger display size, but the pics themselves are really neat.


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