post by roue_libre | | Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA <Reply # 4 on 3/13/2021 6:24 AM >
It's pretty sweet how the sun is rising EXACTLY over the tracks! I might pan the shot further to the left so that the tracks occupy more of the horizontal space in the photo. That will also bring the vanishing point closer to 2/3 of the horizontal space. If you want this centred, then really centre it ;)
I was temped to say "try not to have the horizon right in the middle of the photo", but I think the vertical angle kinda works, here, because the sky and the tracks are both interesting features. Just my 0.02.
post by kabdad | | Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA <Reply # 5 on 3/17/2021 3:17 PM >
I like the idea and agree with previous comments. I'd adjust the point a view to center up the tracks and sun more. I also would try a smaller aperture setting to try to get the skyline and trees more in focus, if possible.