Posted by ryanpics There are a few little things I would do differently but they're more concepts than specific things and would take way too long to explain. For the last one, you need to close down the aperture. You'll need to be in aperture or manual mode for this, and you just need to make the F value higher. Personally though, I think it would look best with just the foreground in focus. Once you start editing your pictures, make sure you're shooting in RAW. This will give you the most flexibility in adjustments and help you save otherwise unusable shots. |
Posted by 08j23 Overall you're doing pretty well. As time goes on you'll get better and better at framing subjects. Don't be afraid to try different techniques and compositions which subjects. Do what feels right and you'll set your own path for it. |
Posted by randomesquephoto So, I did some quick edits, I think might help. Best to get framing and exposure right when you're taking your shot. But, whatever. If you aren't going to edit at all, no need to shoot raw. You can set up your jpegs to look kind of how you want in camera. But you won't have much left to work with if you did want to edit. AT f13, you could focus on the skates, or at least closer to the skates, and the buildings would have been either in focus, or acceptably so. watch your vertical lines. These edits aren't perfect, but making them straighter, and... isolating the subjects a bit more. |
Posted by Xiketic Thanks for the help randomesquephoto and ciano! Randomesquephoto, I like what you did with the colors. How did you do that? |
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