post by zephyrbadge | | Re: Thoughts or suggestions? <Reply # 1 on 6/24/2018 8:48 PM >
All great shots! I think #4 definitely needs to be straightened out.
#2 i feel like it's a bit hard to figure out the focus of this shot, I personally think the focus is the bench and the mirror silhouette, but the window backdrop and the door frames kinda detract from that. Maybe just a little less door frame in the shot I think would improve it a lot
all in all some really awesome shots! I want to go to places like these
post by Makeshift Mickey | | Re: Thoughts or suggestions? <Reply # 2 on 6/24/2018 11:44 PM >
I really liked #1 and #3. In my opinion, #2 has too large of a contrast in exposure. The sides of the image are really dark while the window is overexposed. I think framing a shot in portrait would have been better here to eliminate most of the sides of the doorway. #4 has the framing slightly off, but I believe you could mostly fix it in post using Photoshop or Lightroom.
post by edsel | | Re: Thoughts or suggestions? <Reply # 3 on 6/25/2018 4:14 PM >
#2 if your subject is the desk i feel you can completely miss it with tag on the board above it. I’d get a little closer and focus more on it if your trying to show just the desk. And I don’t see the window as being over exposed since I can see the colors of the bricks and vine in it.
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