|Posted by Steed|
There are various things you could do to improve its composition, starting with the positioning of the model, maybe to actually pose her or have her shadow do something interesting, or silhouette her better in the window. You could crop it more tightly, maybe taking 1 cm off the left and cropping the right so there are only two eyes, which could be more striking.
|Posted by blackhawk|
a better angle could have been had.
#4 is a great shot, I love the huge open spaces and the concrete columns.
Great subject, cam position, composition and framing.
My only criticism is the group positioning; positioning is too symmetrical.
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