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post by hauntedlikeahouse

Critiques welcome!
< on 1/23/2017 5:18 PM >

Hello folks, basically looking for any advice here. I'm still getting the hang of post processing in lightroom but I really prefer the subtle & natural look when it comes to editing. I don't like to get too heavy with it. I appreciate any pointers/critique.

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post by WIurbex

Re: Critiques welcome!
<Reply # 1 on 1/23/2017 7:17 PM >

I like the look of your edits! Well done in my opinion.

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post by dundertits

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<Reply # 2 on 1/23/2017 8:25 PM >

yes comp and PP looking good to me

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post by rob.i.am

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<Reply # 3 on 1/24/2017 1:53 AM >

Watch your lines. I'd straighten 1,2 and 4 and maybe crop 4 more like this:

The stairs aren't bad but I suck at shorting stairs.

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post by blackhawk

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Re: Critiques welcome!
<Reply # 4 on 1/24/2017 2:06 AM >

Posted by rob.i.am
Watch your lines. I'd straighten 1,2 and 4 and maybe crop 4 more like this:

http://i387.photob...tos/Snapseed_1.jpg

The stairs aren't bad but I suck at shorting stairs.

Exactly.
Get in the habit of square off your shots unless you a good artist reason not to do so...
The stairs is sort of working in the last shot, but the first one should have the lines on the corners and show the top step and landing.
Pan back and get more height; stand on something if you must.

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post by hauntedlikeahouse

Re: Critiques welcome!
<Reply # 5 on 1/24/2017 2:30 AM >

Thanks for the kind words and advice folks, much appreciated. I see what you're saying about the composition. I'll mess around and see what I can do.

Posted by rob.i.am
Watch your lines. I'd straighten 1,2 and 4 and maybe crop 4 more like this:

http://i387.photob...tos/Snapseed_1.jpg

The stairs aren't bad but I suck at shorting stairs.

It's funny I actually cropped that photo just like that but I wasn't sure which one I liked better. Thanks!

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post by hauntedlikeahouse

Re: Critiques welcome!
<Reply # 6 on 1/24/2017 3:27 PM >

Posted by rob.i.am
Watch your lines. I'd straighten 1,2 and 4 and maybe crop 4 more like this:

http://i387.photob...tos/Snapseed_1.jpg

The stairs aren't bad but I suck at shorting stairs.

DSC_1068 by Jer Fo, on Flickr

Edit: Keep finding crops I like better, so far I like this one the best I think, with the door trim fully in the photo.

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post by dundertits

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<Reply # 7 on 1/24/2017 3:38 PM >

what are you shooting with? the nikons have built in lines and a really good level in live view

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post by hauntedlikeahouse

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<Reply # 8 on 1/24/2017 4:10 PM >

Posted by dundertits
what are you shooting with? the nikons have built in lines and a really good level in live view

At the time I was using a Nikon D7000 with the Tokina 11-16 2.8. Now I have a Canon SL1.

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post by rob.i.am

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<Reply # 9 on 1/24/2017 11:17 PM >

Posted by hauntedlikeahouse

https://c1.staticflickr.com/1/583/31659401494_549c9def5d_b.jpg DSC_1068 by Jer Fo, on Flickr

Edit: Keep finding crops I like better, so far I like this one the best I think, with the door trim fully in the photo.

I like that.

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