Posted by flySparro Photographically, 4-7 & 10 don't seem that well thought out. They get the message across but they don't stand out in any way. I can see you've got yourself a 1.8 or 1.4 or something based on image 1. Looks like a decent one from what I can see! I like the red door, good framing, pretty straight lines s'far as I can tell, good color! Honestly I might say IMO that's the best one in the set. Remember color, remember light, and find interesting ways (levels? Get up high, get low) and maybe use that wide aperture to draw attention to something. Of course the aperture played no part in the red door photo but you know what I mean. If you have a post-processing tool like Adobe Photoshop or Lightroom you may want to consider tackling the purple fringe in image 7. Light/dark edges make light bend pretty extremely through lens glass, this fringing (either orange/blue or green/purple) is called Chromatic Aberration - do forgive me if you're already familiar with the concept! You can stop down your lens to f/4 or above to tackle the chromatic ab, or fix it in post pretty easily, especially if you shoot RAW. Hope this helps! Nice explore ;) |
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