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post by smokedguadacheese

What do you guys think?
< on 1/30/2016 9:46 AM >

One day after chilling at the hospital for an hour and half I got bored and said f*ck it, i'll take a break and go explore for a little bit. Initially I was thinking for like five minutes i'd just head towards the city but then I remembered there are some trestles off some destroyed railroad tracks up west, so I headed west. This was a solo trip. For all you kids afraid of going alone, I do a lot! I got some other shots with less clothes on but I believe one of UER's rules is no nudity so i'll have to control myself and not post them.

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post by Vicinity

Re: What do you guys think?
<Reply # 1 on 1/30/2016 10:32 AM >

The bolt of the track appears to be the sharpest part of the image and draws my eye immediately instead of looking at what I should be - you!

Very fun images though, you look like you're having a ball!

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post by DawnPatrol

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<Reply # 2 on 1/31/2016 4:12 AM >

Your poses look very forced. You look like you're trying to look like you're running super hard. You don't actually look like you're trying to run though.

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post by Peptic Ulcer

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<Reply # 3 on 1/31/2016 11:51 AM >

I think you should put your clothes on and photograph something more interesting than your ass.

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post by siper

Re: What do you guys think?
<Reply # 4 on 1/31/2016 7:34 PM >

Posted by smokedguadacheese
This was a solo trip. For all you kids afraid of going alone, I do a lot!

Fear isn't the reason that you shouldn't go alone. You bring a friend so if you accidentally fall off those tracks or get hit by a train, your friend can get help...or take photos and laugh. It all depends on the quality of company you keep.

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post by blackhawk

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Re: What do you guys think?
<Reply # 5 on 2/2/2016 6:13 PM >

Posted by Vicinity
The bolt of the track appears to be the sharpest part of the image and draws my eye immediately instead of looking at what I should be - you!

Very fun images though, you look like you're having a ball!

His cam technique is fine. The train trestle is far more interesting than our newbie poster child.

As for having a ball... Playing on train tracks is a good way to be KIA.
Never play on steel.

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post by tiffers

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<Reply # 6 on 2/2/2016 6:30 PM >

I really like the angle...and the leading lines. But, the focusing is off (as mentioned) and the fog is perfect! Also, from behind...you look like a 10 year old. lol How old are you?

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post by blackhawk

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<Reply # 7 on 2/3/2016 2:29 PM >

Posted by tiffers
I really like the angle...

That would be the cam laying on the RR tie... on timer shoot

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post by GunnerNZ

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<Reply # 8 on 2/3/2016 9:47 PM >

I'm glad you've put something up for critique. I think this photography is attention-seeking at its core. It can be argued of course that any publication is attention-seeking, and so it comes down to a personal appraisal of whether the art in the images is worth one's attention. I see a harmless bit of fun here, and if that's what you're trying to achieve, then fair play to you. I'll leave it to photographers present to critique the technical aspects.

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post by tiffers

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<Reply # 9 on 2/6/2016 11:36 PM >

Posted by blackhawk

That would be the cam laying on the RR tie... on timer shoot

It doesn't necessarily matter how the angle was achieved in order to be liked or not. ;)

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post by Steed

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<Reply # 10 on 3/20/2016 10:33 AM >

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post by Peptic Ulcer

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<Reply # 11 on 3/20/2016 12:00 PM >

Oh god I thought this thread had died. All we need now is for Neal, SGC, and Seph Lawless to team up for some truly remarkable commentary...

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post by blackhawk

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<Reply # 12 on 3/20/2016 2:25 PM >

Posted by Steed
http://daehanminde...okedguadacheez.gif

Too funny Steed. A dancing malaka.

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post by niteratzclub

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<Reply # 13 on 3/20/2016 3:05 PM >

Posted by Steed
http://daehanminde...okedguadacheez.gif

My Grandma can walk better than him ha. Love the loop btw hahaha.

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post by LuminousAphid

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<Reply # 14 on 3/22/2016 6:34 AM >

Reminds me of a certain Monty Python skit

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