I enjoy the perspective of this one, I feel like the contrast is great and you definitely get a feeling of abandonment from it. I do wish that you would've shifted slightly to your left and taken a more symmetrical shot of it. I do think that the foliage is a bit distracting however, maybe tone the saturation down just a bit?
Overall not a bad photo, good job.
And here is the photo I'm offering up for you critics:
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