post by PierreB | | Re: First critique! <Reply # 2 on 3/10/2014 4:59 PM >
I kind of like the ladder, it adds a sort of natural frame.
I like the light in the image and the black and white processing done. Seems the point of focus is a bit too much on the lower end of the pipe instead of on the wheel, which seems to be a more important element to me.
Maybe a bit less depth of field (wider aperture) to blur the background a bit more and make the front wheel and pipe pop.
Overall, a nice image and I totally agree, would love to see what else you have ;)