post by macaroo | | Re: Critique <Reply # 1 on 2/25/2014 1:09 AM >
a little too grainy for my taste. also, i would have shifted the shot over a bit to the left so that all of the window on the left is shown. a small amount of crop off the top too.
post by johnnycanuck | | Re: Critique <Reply # 3 on 2/25/2014 2:03 AM >
I cast doubt on your mother's integrity and question your sexual tastes.
But really, I do enjoy the colors, lighting, and angle. However, I do think that the upper bit is a little...overwhelming. A crop job would reinstate its symmetry.
post by sirpsychosexy | | Re: Critique <Reply # 5 on 2/25/2014 7:26 PM >
It seems as if the picture is taken with a point and shoot camera? It's quality is pretty bad, a lot of grain, barrel distortion and fringing. The distortion and fringing can possibly be corrected in Photoshop but I think the grain is too much to eliminate.
Also, did you square crop it yourself? Square crops can be nice but in this case it isn't working in my opinion. It's also more important with a square picture that, like macaroo said, nothing gets cutt off at the edges.
But don't let it bring you down. Keep on shooting and as long as you enjoy the exploring, the pictures will get better every time ;)
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