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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > Old factory rooftop in Texas(Viewed 1093 times)
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Old factory rooftop in Texas
< on 6/10/2022 3:21 AM >
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Hello, first time posting. Thank you for taking the time to critique. Looking for honest feedback, as I'm looking to grow in this area of photography. I've been digging through my RAW files from several years back and cleaning up some of the ones that I think might be worth looking at. This one is from 2017. Thank you for the critique!



Pearson location:
Chicagoland/Sometimes Austin
 
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Re: Old factory rooftop in Texas
<Reply # 1 on 6/10/2022 3:39 AM >
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Only major thing I'd say is to straighten the vertical lines



SpaceAgePigeon   |  | 
Re: Old factory rooftop in Texas
<Reply # 2 on 6/10/2022 4:25 AM >
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I can do that. Thank you!



nausea location:
Germany
 
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Re: Old factory rooftop in Texas
<Reply # 3 on 6/26/2022 7:38 AM >
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I feel like some more empty space around the subject could be good.



Arch-Image location:
DFW
 
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Re: Old factory rooftop in Texas
<Reply # 4 on 6/30/2022 8:28 PM >
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A great shot!

As pear mentioned I would straighten the lines, sometimes its better if you leave it alone but I played with a bit and it does look better. Also, I love the "gloomy" look but if you do some hillites on things like the lights, pipe some of the vertical steel, basically areas that have a bit of highlight to them already and pop them out it adds some to the photo to me.



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