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Infiltration Forums > UE Photo Critiques > SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA(Viewed 3596 times)
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SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
< on 3/4/2020 3:45 PM >
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Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
<Reply # 1 on 3/5/2020 5:35 AM >
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I really like the way the sunlight illuminates the rail road tracks.

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Danny_phantom location:
New York
 
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Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
<Reply # 2 on 1/8/2021 4:22 PM >
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Nice sunrise, maybe zoom in more? As to show less structures and noise around the target(middle light).



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bleckfrog location:
SF East Bay
 
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Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
<Reply # 3 on 1/8/2021 7:01 PM >
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i like the light on the tracks! nice silhouette all around.

i personally would clone/heal stamp the plane and its trail from the top right since i think its a bit distracting.

for composition, i personally would crop in from the left to center the sun, since it's a bit off center right now.



roue_libre location:
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Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
<Reply # 4 on 3/13/2021 6:24 AM >
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It's pretty sweet how the sun is rising EXACTLY over the tracks!
I might pan the shot further to the left so that the tracks occupy more of the horizontal space in the photo. That will also bring the vanishing point closer to 2/3 of the horizontal space. If you want this centred, then really centre it ;)

I was temped to say "try not to have the horizon right in the middle of the photo", but I think the vertical angle kinda works, here, because the sky and the tracks are both interesting features. Just my 0.02.




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kabdad location:
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Re: SUNRISE BEFORE URBEX ERIE PA
<Reply # 5 on 3/17/2021 3:17 PM >
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I like the idea and agree with previous comments. I'd adjust the point a view to center up the tracks and sun more. I also would try a smaller aperture setting to try to get the skyline and trees more in focus, if possible.



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