Posted by budda As for the photo, there's kinda a lot going on. The subject is vague and has little contrast with the background. The eye's moreso drawn to that little green doodad on the bottom left corner as it's the strongest contrast and almost larger in the frame. Then there's that strong line above the subject that kinda moreso leads you away from it over to those panels on the right. So I'm kinda bouncing all over here wondering what exactly it is you want me to look at. A possible fix would be to crop out some of those panels on the right (maybe about where that yellow-ish card is on the one) so the top and bottom would kind of form more of a frame around the furnace.
Or better yet if you get a chance to shoot there again, maybe get more of a straight on angle that removes that green and red thing from the shot.
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I totally see what you mean about things being distracting. If I did it again I think id go up or down a floor and shoot straight on from really far back with a 70-200.
I ended up getting a 17-35 f4, I find my self shooting around f5 to f6 most of the time anyway. My camera is full-frame so I think our lenses have similar fields of view despite the focal length difference. So far no complaints.