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Liska
 
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 |  | Where'd I go wrong?
< on 3/3/2012 1:32 AM >
|  | | | Hmmm; for some strange reason I really love these shots, but i'm lacking the usual responses I get from all my pics, so I must have missed something along the way! I was trying to do something different than I normally do, too, but i guess it didn't work very well? Any feedback would be great.
Thanks! 
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Mill by SPierceUrbex, on Flickr
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Weirdlig
  
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| | Re: Where'd I go wrong?
<Reply # 1 on 3/3/2012 2:17 AM >
| | | | I like all these shots, I see nothing wrong. I just think 6 has too little going on in some areas. Just typical cropping, there's a large amount of unnecessary blackness.
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| |  | Re: Where'd I go wrong?
<Reply # 2 on 3/3/2012 3:04 AM >
| | | | They're all a little too cramped, I would have used DOF to isolate a focus point.
"No risk, no reward, no fun."
"Go all the way or walk away"
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Liska
location:
Western Massachusetts
Gender: Female
| | Re: Where'd I go wrong?
<Reply # 3 on 3/3/2012 3:19 AM >
| | | | Thank you both! I will keep your comments in mind as i'm shooting again this weekend!
I do understand what you mean about them feeling cramped; but, granted, i WAS pretty cramped when i was shooting them. I think i wedged myself into a 2foot by 1ft spot to shoot from underneath the generator; i just brought my camera down with me, hand held, and shot "from the hip", as I couldn't really move myself to see through the viewfinder or look at the live view screen on the back of my camera until I got out. i'll see what i can figure out to get one main focal point
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Adv.Pack
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Adventure Pack
| | Re: Where'd I go wrong?
<Reply # 4 on 3/3/2012 4:17 AM >
| | | | The first few I can't even tell what they are. This separates me from the subject matter leaving only a pattern for me to look at. In other words, they don't hold my interest at all.
#6 has WAY too much black.
#7 and 8 are a little batter. I still think you need to back up more.
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<Reply # 5 on 3/3/2012 4:27 AM >
| | | | I like two, it should be cropped tighter, though.
more interesting composition no?
vs old
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Rozz
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The Whales Vagina, CA
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| | | Re: Where'd I go wrong?
<Reply # 6 on 3/3/2012 3:59 PM >
| | | | I agree with them being "cramped". Theres no focus point and my eye is kinda wandering all over the picture waiting for something to pop out. A little bit of depth of field would help a lot. And possibly some slightly different angles and not as zoomed in (I did read your dilemma when taking them though and I guess theres nothing we can do about that).
I do like the cropped version of #2 and #8 tho - those are my favorites =)
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