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project2501
  
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< on 1/17/2012 8:04 AM >
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Harvestman
 
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Gender: Male
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| | | Re: Parking Garage x2 (just one)
<Reply # 1 on 1/17/2012 3:12 PM >
| | | | It'd be great if it were pulled back a bit more. The way it looks now looks kind of like a bad crop job.
I guess the thing I find the most fault with is the fact that so much of the object in focus is in the picture. My eye is drawn to what's blurred out. I do like the colors and the lighting, though.
Oh good, my slow clap processor made it into this thing.
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Weirdlig
Gender: Female
| | Re: Parking Garage x2 (just one)
<Reply # 2 on 1/17/2012 3:17 PM >
| | | | I agree on the colors and lighting. I would have wanted the window shot straight-on but this is under the assumption the sight in the distance wouldn't be compromised by the angle.
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Astro
    
Usually naked
location:
The Delta Quadrant
Gender: Male
Resistance is Futile
| | Re: Parking Garage x2 (just one)
<Reply # 3 on 1/17/2012 3:22 PM >
| | | | When you frame something like this you are leading the viewers eyes to look into the window and you are disappointing them because in all honesty, there is nearly nothing of interest in this photo.
Like HarvestmanMan said, you should have moved back a bit, it DOES look like a bad crop. If you wanted to put focus on the detail of the window frame, you should have put more window frame in the photo.
I also think it should have been centered as well. The empty blue space on the right once again leads the viewers eyes to the blurry contents in the window.
That being said, you choice of the lighting is indeed interesting with such a strong blue.
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RunkPock
location:
Vancouver
Gender: Male
| | Re: Parking Garage x2 (just one)
<Reply # 4 on 1/17/2012 8:08 PM >
| | | | I find the blue to be way to much.
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BaRTiMuS
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Parking Garage x2 (just one)
<Reply # 5 on 1/17/2012 9:35 PM >
| | | | Posted by HarvestmanMan
It'd be great if it were pulled back a bit more. The way it looks now looks kind of like a bad crop job.
I guess the thing I find the most fault with is the fact that so much of the object in focus is in the picture. My eye is drawn to what's blurred out. I do like the colors and the lighting, though.
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+1, your eye naturally gravitates to whats inside the window frame, and that's out of focus.
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