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Noob 2
< on 7/10/2011 5:59 AM >
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Re: Noob 2
<Reply # 1 on 7/10/2011 1:15 PM >
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Not much impact. Also, the focus point is on the wall, not on the wire.
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Re: Noob 2
<Reply # 2 on 7/11/2011 2:48 AM >
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Interesting dof, nice texture, boring composition.

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Re: Noob 2
<Reply # 3 on 7/11/2011 3:09 PM >
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Posted by Eschaton
Interesting dof, nice texture, boring composition.


Agreed.

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Re: Noob 2
<Reply # 4 on 7/11/2011 4:40 PM >
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I agree with whats been said. The texture and light is nice though. The black shadow in the corner could be cropped out because it doesn't add anything to the photo and is a bit distracting. Also, not everyone agrees with me on this, but I think photos seem to be more deliberate when the lines are nice and straight. Otherwise it has the feeling of a snapshot.

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Re: Noob 2
<Reply # 5 on 7/13/2011 3:46 AM >
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I agree with the suggestion of cropping the black corner and the focus point, but I love the idea very cool

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