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callmejazz
   
location:
High Point, NC
Gender: Male
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< on 7/1/2011 5:17 AM >
|  | | | Let me know what you think. Looking for advice on subject matter and quality of image.
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"Bloody" Olympus E-600. S.P.E.C.T.R.E. |
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ensimismada
location:
CA
Gender: Female
...wishing I had time for one more photo...
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<Reply # 1 on 7/1/2011 10:55 PM >
| | | | I'm no great critic but here are my gut reactions:
#1 is dim and low-contrast, but I love the textures and the composition. Definitely my favorite.
#2 is dim and low-contrast, but far less interesting. Maybe if it were a little closer to following the rule of thirds..?
#3 has nice colors and reflections but the composition is bland. Even something as simple as framing the furniture piece farther the right might have helped.
#4 is also strong. I really like the low horizon. You could maybe try a little cropping on the bottom and possibly the right, but I do like it a lot as is.
#5 doesn't do much for me. I want more details, a closer peak. Or else give me more of a sense of the setting/place of this little hut in the greater world at large.
#6 has interesting lighting but is washed out. The composition isn't the strongest for highlighting those cool shadows.
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BeowulfBrower
location:
Mendota, IL
Gender: Male
Profession Tetanus Shot Receiver
| | Re: Yep
<Reply # 2 on 7/1/2011 11:22 PM >
| | | | For number 6, HDR would work
Or if you don't have an HDR app/don't like HDR try bracketing it down a bit so the shadows pop more.
Is that snow or asbestos? |
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Porcelain Doll
  
location:
philadelphia
Gender: Female
Who Cooks For You?
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<Reply # 3 on 7/7/2011 4:46 AM >
| | | | i think one and two need more contrasts.
it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.
“Everyones so shady. That’s why I’m so fuckin pale.” - Porcelain Black |
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barefootpoetry
location:
PA
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 4 on 7/7/2011 1:43 PM >
| | | | Out of all of these I like #6 the best. The rest don't really grab my attention.
She who hesitates, sees bulldozers. |
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RebelDead
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 5 on 7/7/2011 1:47 PM >
| | | | I like the subject matter. Diversity is good. Too much of one thing is boring.
Closer than you think~ When you dig up the past, you tend to get dirty.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/rebeldead/ |
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