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What would you do if your life exceeds your dreams?
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< on 5/26/2011 12:58 AM >
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No one there today, just the sounds of a far distance lawnmower.
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ahhntzville
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| | Re: No Place for a Child
<Reply # 1 on 5/26/2011 1:57 AM >
| | | | Place looks awesome. 2 and 3 are the same photo.
Edit: just realized I was in the critique forum. Photo 2 and photo 3, which are the same photo lol, are very nicely executed as far as the exposure and capturing that great golden light, but the composition is kinda weak. Hard to say how I would have done it better, though, without a wider shot and not knowing this place.
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| | Re: No Place for a Child
<Reply # 3 on 5/26/2011 3:26 PM >
| | | | Posted by Adv.Pack
Yeah, 1 and 2 need a wider angle or a different composition. 5 needs more shadow detail. 6 is way blown out and seems like a point and shoot shot. Try to get a different perspective.
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Thanks , I had to hold the camera around the corner one handed to get the kitchen shot and I had the lense on close up by accident. I also tried to delete 2 and it did not work. I am new here. Thanks! It is a Nikon d5000. New to me, I borrowed it .
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| | Re: No Place for a Child
<Reply # 4 on 5/27/2011 2:49 AM >
| | | | 7 is the most interesting to me, I like the perspective but I'd crop out that bit of blown out sky.
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