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Phoenix
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Adv.Pack
location:
Connecticut
Adventure Pack
| | Re: some random paper place
<Reply # 1 on 5/22/2011 11:30 AM >
| | | | 1. woah! That lens is terrible.
2. This one is really fun and interesting. Good job.
3. I like the reflection but, its too dark. I also don't like the stuff on the right or the white highlights in the water.
4. dark
5. dark
6. uninteresting
7. uninteresting
8. uninteresting and way dark.
9. Nice light but no subject.
10. Nice light but too much black (different from too dark).
11. Maybe slightly blurry.
good job.
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sandy frank
  
location:
Indiana-ish
Gender: Male
Why doesn't Johnny care...?
| | Re: some random paper place
<Reply # 2 on 5/22/2011 1:34 PM >
| | | | 1. The pseudo-fisheye, not so much. Crooked. Boring subject matter.
2. Cool scene. I'm thinking a different composition. Move around, maybe closer to the ground. Just move around. Heck, a shot where the torso is almost filling the frame, but with the surroundings showing might be cool.
3. Not hip on the composition - the stuff on the right hand is distracting. A little underexposed, but I do love the reflection in the water.
4 and 5. Mmmm... Control panels. Love me some control panels. Anyhoo, both under exposed and there's no clear focus. I'd say get closer and fill the frame more. And focus.
6. Boring background. Get closer.
7. Kinda cool, could have used a narrower DoF, methinks.
8. Underexposed, but looks like a decent composition and the equipment looks like it might be fun.
9, 10, 11. Not too terribly interesting and very underexposed.
Got some good stuff though!
Also! Try and keep only about 6 or less photos in your critique threads. You'll have better responses!
I've no sense, I lick electric fence; I put barbed wire in my pants and do a Celtic dance.
- My Canon 300D is beat to hell, a bit finicky, and a 'lil loose, much like everything else I own...
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