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Staab
 
location:
Saskatoon
Gender: Male
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< on 2/10/2011 1:45 AM >
|  | | | Been playing with my camera for few years now never really post anything or show people my stuff but I figure I have been a member here for awhile why not. Only one for now, let it fly!
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Harvestman
   
location:
Somewhere in SORTA/TANK Territory!
Gender: Male
Everything about me has a poker face.
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<Reply # 1 on 2/10/2011 3:17 AM >
| | | | I like it a lot. I especially love how the numbers seem to glow around the edges.
Only thing I would change is maybe zooming it out a little more, as it's a little bit large. Other than that, I got nothin'. Good work!
Oh good, my slow clap processor made it into this thing.
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Steed
    
location:
Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
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<Reply # 2 on 2/15/2011 5:36 AM >
| | | | I like it as is. Solid colours, straight lines.
If you were to zoom out at all, consider framing it using the rule of thirds so the button is not directly in the middle. But I think for a macro photo like this, it's fine as is.
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jerm IX
location:
Somewhere, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
If you can't find something nice to say...say it on UER.
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<Reply # 3 on 2/16/2011 4:38 PM >
| | | | money shot.
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Canadavey
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location:
York Region
Gender: Male
Dehr.
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<Reply # 4 on 2/16/2011 6:39 PM >
| | | | I agree with Steed. Zooming out more might introduce other "things" into the frame that could spoil the picture. Nice how it is - don't touch. 
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thewonderstory
location:
Northern New Jersey
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 5 on 2/22/2011 8:26 PM >
| | | | I love that golden rust color along the left side and how it's repeated in the center. Plus you have the red and golden rust playing nicely with each other. Love the composition.
"Our real discoveries come from chaos, from going to the place that looks wrong and stupid and foolish." -Chuck Palahniuk |
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yokes
location:
Toronto
Gender: Male
I aim to misbehave
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<Reply # 6 on 2/22/2011 9:34 PM >
| | | | My initial thought is that if you're going for symmetry, go all out. Square crop it, and have it dead to rights centre in the image. Right now it is a little high and a little right of centre, but not enough to make it look like it was done on purpose or for a reason. It doesn't balance the composition. Also, it looks a little soft, but that could just be this monitor. I really like the colours.
"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water and stupid men." - Richard Nickel |
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