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insanedArk
     
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 |  | Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
< on 1/3/2011 7:05 AM >
|  | | | I made like a ghost today and defied gravity, logic and security today. Was quite fun. What do you think of the shot?
10mm for 3 seconds, f/8, ISO 200. Lines corrected and pic sharpened in CS4.
[last edit 1/3/2011 7:05 AM by insanedArk - edited 1 times]
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The Seeker
 
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Gender: Male
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| |  | Re: Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
<Reply # 1 on 1/3/2011 1:39 PM >
| | | | I personally really like it... I'm impressed!
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Axle
 
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Gender: Male
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| | Re: Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
<Reply # 2 on 1/3/2011 2:47 PM >
| | | | First off. Very well composed, clean straight lines. However some of the details are lost in the dark. Try adjusting the curves to brighten it up or make the adjustments to the RAW file either using Lr or Ps upon import.
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Steed
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Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
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| | | Re: Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
<Reply # 3 on 1/24/2011 3:55 PM >
| | | | I'm not convinced that the dark is bad for the photo. That said, the top two storeys seem a little more unnatural.
What I'd like to see is the same shot, pulled back a bit so you get more of the connecting walls as sort of a frame (might be totally impossible depending on the room). This one has a good 2d cross-section feel, but I'd like to see it as more of a 3d inside-of-a-cube.
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Glass
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Chicago
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| | | Re: Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
<Reply # 4 on 2/1/2011 3:47 PM >
| | | | I like the low darks, but try boosting some detail out of your mid and high range with curves. Also, it's crooked. Always makes sure, when you're going for the stark, straight industrial shots, that it's leveled against your vertical and horizontal plains.
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Street Ghost
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Charlotte,NC
Gender: Male
| | Re: Steel Fortress by Insane Dick
<Reply # 5 on 2/4/2011 8:56 PM >
| | | | I love the comp. But ya need to square it up a tad.
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